Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 5:36 PMChapter 5
12:30 AM. James wasn’t able to fall asleep, so he pulled out his laptop to check his e-mail. He had one from Taylor.
It read out:
You won’t believe the horrors I have just read tonight… after school, let’s meet in the corner of the Junior Hallway… God, we seriously need to discuss of what we’re going to do!!! In the meantime, stay away from Fernando!!!
James then closed his laptop, ready for what was to happen tomorrow.
Or was he?
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Jesus was walking to school, even though he usually was driven to school. He had not gotten the e-mail from Taylor. He didn’t know that Fernando was now dangerous.
Jesus turned around to see that Fernando was walking behind him. Jesus smiled and gestured at Fernando, with Fernando giving no response.
Then, from nowhere, came a stray dog. It was giant, ugly German Shepard, and it started to lung forward at Jesus. The dog went and started biting at Jesus’s legs.
Jesus begin to scream for help, for Fernando to do something…
But Fernando just stood there… smiling… laughing
The dog had started to bite Jesus head.
After a few moments, he stopped moving. After the dog finsihed him, Fernando threw a big rock at the dog’s head. He then walked forward, now looking at the bodies of a dead boy and a dead dog. Fernando picked out his phone, paused for a few moments, and dialed 911.
“Yes!!! There’s been an accident my friend has been attacked by a dog, and I don’t know if he’s alive or not!!!!” Said Fernando.
The call continued, and the ambulance came and carried Jesus away, while some police officers were interviewing Fernando. He was crying, and told them the story, stating that the dog attacked Jesus, and he was trying to figure out how to save him, and threw a rock at the dog, but by then it might have already been too late.
They believed him, and he went to school, telling the whole story. After school, the others meant as planned.
“I can tell that sick mothervucker is lying, I know it!!! Paden said, angrily.
“Of course he is!!! My God, what has happened…?” Said Adam, crying.
They still didn’t know whether or not Jesus survived.
“Look, we need to report him to the police!” Said James.
“For what!!! There’s no evidence against his story!!” Said Adam.
“NO!!! I mean we have to show his Diary to the cops!!! To our parents!!! Someone who can do something!!!” Said James.
“If we do that, we could get into trouble!!! What we did was illegal, after all!!!” Said Jay, horribly frustrated.
“So we’re just going to let him get even more physcothic!!!” Said Ethan.
Everyone went silent.
Ryan was there.
“I’ll tell my parents about everything.” He said.
Everyone then calmed down, and they then began walking to the hospital, where they would see about Jesus and his fate.
From the corner of the hallway, Fernando looked disgusted.
Luckily, he knew a lot about computers… Ryan, well he would have to deal with at a later time.
Hope you all liked it! Please leave a comment!!!
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Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 5:41 PMGood chapter but, man was that harsh.
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 5:42 PMThanks, but relax, Catzilla said he was fine with it, he even asked me if this could happen to him!
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JRR
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 5:43 PMHaha good chapter :)
JRR
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 5:43 PMHaha good chapter :)
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-28-2014 5:43 PMYou know what I think about this chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 5:44 PMOk. I'm excited to see what the crew does next.
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 5:44 PMThanks Catzilla for liking! Still can't see why you wanted to die, though, haha!
Thanks anyway Mr. Happy!
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 5:50 PMGood chapter as always. I hope I dont die:) P.S. Who is James? I got almost everyone but who James and Ryan are
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 5:50 PMAnother nice chapter 401! It was a bit harsh, but I like where this series is going.
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 5:51 PMAllo, Ryan is an imaginary character, and James is Gojira2K. You won't Cat only did out of request.
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Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 5:51 PMThanks Sci-Fi King!!! IF this justifies the story, cat requested to die.
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Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 6:03 PMYeah! I'm in this one more! Great job! I hope to stay in it and not die.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 6:03 PMThanks Gojira!!! I hope so too...
Haha, just joking!!!
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 6:28 PMThanks raptor
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 7:03 PMWARNING: Chapter 6 may or may not be posted tomorrow.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 7:12 PMOk keeping my fingers crossed it will be there tommorrow. I might as post my own warning.
WARNING: SF May or May not be posted tommorrow
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 7:17 PMWell, I hope it can to, but tomorrow is Friday.... Might take a while to rest, since it's gonna be a 4-day weekend for me, and although I am enjoying school a lot, it still would be nice to take a break.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 7:21 PMYou have school, I didn't know that. I don't have it until the 2nd. My main reason for possibly no SF is that I've been really busy making the extra fights and I have a lot of people over at my house so I can't type the fights. Also Im a horrible slow writer
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 7:23 PMYeah, private schools are different. Well, hope you do good. Just wondering, what grade are you going to be in? Just wondering.
That's alright, take your time on things, don't rush it.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 8:10 PMI'm going to be going into eight
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 8:11 PMAh, good good, last year of middle school.
Sophomore year for me.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 8:14 PMCool. It seems like almost everyone here is in high school, college, or is all grown up
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 8:15 PMWell there are some others that are younger.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 8:19 PMTrue like HPP is my age but thats the only one I know
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 8:24 PMUCMP was/is 13 I believe. I'm 14, 'bout to turn 15 in about 3 months. A lot of JW regulars were born in the year 1999, actually.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 8:26 PMI'm 13 about to be 14 in... 7 months 2001 that's the year I was born.
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-28-2014 8:27 PMInteresting. Have no idea what else to say, haha.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 8:31 PMMe neither ha.
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-28-2014 8:36 PMAt least now you're closer to 3000
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!