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The Fight of the Ages: Chapter 1: What Goes Around Comes Around

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Raptor-401

MemberAllosaurusJul-11-2014 2:26 PM

I hope you all are happy with this part. I will admit it was very tough killing off these characters, but it was the best I tried.

Let it begin.

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In the forest, Captain 2K was walking about. With his mighty 2 swords he swooped around, cutting off branches and bushes in the way with a quick, easy, and mighty swipe of his swords. He was ready to battle anything that would come his way. He would be the one to win. Who could defeat him with his thick armor, the 6 swords extending out of his hands form the armor that could function as throwing knives, who could defeat him with 2 huge, mighty samurai swords? It made sense for him to win. He would be the last one standing. The only way you would be able to kill 2K would be to kill him by somehow penetrating a fatal attack through the small open spot where his armpits lay uncovered. That and you could melt his armor, but it would have to be 300 degrees for that to happen, and none of the contenders could breathe fire, so why worry about that?

2K kept on walking on when he finally spotted a target. It was small, and he laughed at such a small contender to face and kill.

 

 

It was Bright Eyes. Bright Eyes turned around and saw Captain 2K. He saw that 2K was ready to fight, because he held his two swords against Bright Eyes, ready to fight. Bright Eyes locked onto Captain 2K, ready to fight back. He could tell by looking into 2K’s eyes that he was underestimating Bright Eyes, which would be an advantage.

2K ran at Bright Eyes, and slashed both his swords downwards at Bright Eyes. Bright Eyes dodged this and carefully ran around 2K.

Bright Eyes was as smart as a human, after all, so she looked at the back, but 2K was smart enough to put armor on his back. Bright Eyes knew there just had to be a way kill 2K, there had to be some part of 2K’s body that was left unprotected…

2K’s swords were stuck in the dirt. He was trying as hard as he could to pull out the swords from the ground, he needed them for this fight and other fights. He could have used his throwing knives to finish off Bright Eyes quickly, but he wanted to save those for e better and more desperate time. He didn’t worry about Bright Eyes attacking, since his armor was so thick and strong, I mean what harm could a small 3-foot tall raptor do?

That is when Bright Eyes located the weak spot, the unprotected spot. He saw a small gap open in where 2K’s armpit should be. Bright Eyes knew that in order to defeat 2K, he was going to have to use his secret and deadly weapon. What was it, exactly? Bright Eyes due to his over-the-top intelligence had made a contraption attached to his foot that could fire a dart at someone or some animal. It was poisonous and it would take effect on the victim in 20 minutes. But since 2K was a human under all that armor, the poison would take effect even quicker, probably 1 minute.

2K finally managed to get his swords out of the ground. He then quickly swung his right sword at Bright Eyes head, but Bright Eyes ducked the shot.

2K’s armpit was now fully exposed. Bright Eyes shot the dart at the armpit.

2K screamed in pain. The poison was already taking effect, since he was human the posion was more powerful.

 

Bright Eyes had won, and he happily walked away, but then felt a searing pain in his back and looked at his heart to see the tip of a knife coming out of it. He turned around.

 

2K had shot one of his throwing knives at Bright Eyes. Bright Eyes looked at her heart again. There was huge knife through it. Another “whoosh!” came and Bright Eyes had another knife through her heart. Then another. Then 3 more.

 

Bright Eyes and 2K looked at each other, with just seconds left to live. They had both killed each other. 2K was on his knees. With one breath he said:

“Never underestimate the enemy…”

 

2K fell face-first onto the forest floor, dead.

 

Bright Eyes looked at 2K and decided the best way to deal with death, was only to embrace it. With a final breath, Bright Eyes fell to the floor.

 

He too, had underestimated the enemy.

 

 

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Sorry, if I hurt you guys, but I did my best at making you guys died in a dignified way. It was the ebst way I could think of to make the first 2 contenders die. Please comemnt and I hope you enjoyed.

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DinoSteve93
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Nice fight. It was sad, I have to admit, but good job never the less.

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I know, I felt guilty typing it...

But thanks. I tried my best.

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Eh, I guess I had to expect it. Couldn't have much chances in the future fights anyway. Acro, Giga and 2 giant Rexes... ugh :P

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Great job, man! I really enjoyed this! Sad I died, but at least I took him with me.

"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.

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Ha, I killed you first ;)

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I know, I thought it would suck no matter what for the first person to die, so not why have it that he takes hsi killer with him? Gald you enjoyed Gojira.

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Steve, yah, like I said, everyone except the winner will die in a dignified way.

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great job raptor, i found it quite Funny

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I actually am quite offended to be honest that this was found funny... mind you it was suppsoed to have emotion to it... But at least you liked it. Thank you.

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By any chance Raptor, will you have more of this in the future?

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I was thinking that this could sort of become like an FBR only I own it instead of Paden.

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I would love such a thing. It would be interesting to create new characters for every event, so nobody is attached to it :D

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its not Funny in a bad way, its yust that i can't imagine a 3ft raptor with a deadly dart, figthing a human with armor and 2 swords, and 6 throwable swords without laughin

any way nice moral, when an enemy over estimates you, don't over estimate him

 

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I agree DinoSteve.

"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.

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I see what you mean Steve. Guess everyone is gonna want to create more stories, haha.

I now see what you mean Catzilla, but that is what Bright Eyes in Steve's story.

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haha. Would have wrote about the dart thing if only I'd have finished the story :/

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That's sad, but at least the dart thing made you 7th place!!!

 

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Indeed.

hmm... the word dart... reminds me of something...

RexFan should know.....

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In all fairness, I was rooting for 2K there. Good job, what's the title of the next one?

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I will say it once I write the fight. Glad you enjoyed it, and i could understand why you would vote for the samuria.

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Throwing knives and such are re useable, just so you're aware. Oh well, still looking forward to the next one. When's it going to be posted?

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Thanks man. I feel good that you rooted for me.

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Yes, but the bodies are taken away after death, it is a simulation as said in the prologue, a very realistic simulation.

I guess tomorrow sounds good.

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I see. Just wondering why you had him attemting to save them. Looking forward to tomorrow's fight.

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Oh , I see, glad you enjoyed. I am writing it right now.

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Nice! Can't wait for the next one!

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Hope everyone will enjoy it!

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A pretty good battle. I can't wait for the next one.

Also, is my creature idea gonna be in a battle?

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Sci-Fi King, you never PM'ed me or e-mailed me about a character to be featured...

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Oh. I was going to today, but I realized the 24 hours were up.

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