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MemberCompsognathusJul-03-2014 7:08 PMmy atempt to make a story for padens chalange
Journey to the south
April 10th 2001
The following documentary is 100% real and is co-funded by National-Geographic and is authorized by the costarican government
I was sent to Isla Sorna by Dr. Hammond to study the habits of herbivores, when I arrived I was alone, alone in this great green island, it was getting late, since the predators roam the center of the island I decided to make camp on the shore.
The next morning I woke up to see a river was actually nearby so I decide to follow it thinking that there would be many dinosaurs getting a drink of water. turns out I was right the river lead to an open in the forest there where hundreds of dinosaurs of many species,
brachiosaurus with big gray necks that stretched to the bright blue sky, eating the tall trees that only they could reach, a pack of stegosauruses that where eating fresh green ferns that still had dew on there laves, there were even male pachisefalosaurus crashing their heads to prove ho was stronger, but what really got my attention was a heard of parasaurolophus that was composed by a family of five individuals: an alpha male with a very large crest that proved his status, a younger male that had an abnormal gray skin, and 3 gorgeous females.
I decided to follow that heard since the time I discovered that they where migrating to the south of the island to lay eggs, they had to endure a long journey, along the way I could see that like lions or other mammals they care deeply for there mates, I firsr witnessed it when they stopped at a waterfall in the forest everything looked so calmed an quiet there was a beautiful rainbow forming from the light of the sun combined with the splashes and the bubbles that from the water, but then a young female tiranosaurus aproched the group I hid in some bushes while the trex cornered one of the females, she was about to attack but the 2 males aproched her and started to make a very loud high frequencie noise, it hurt so much that the trex had to retreat, the alpha male aproched her in a cute and hearth warming moment he rubed his face against hers to make her feel better.
After days of trabeling they started to feel tiered so they slept while the young male went in search for berries to bring back, while he was gone the rest slept in a circle around a medow of bright blue, red and yellow flowers, the sun was shining but the sound of thunder waked them up as they saw a grat thunder storm form, they all ran to a small cabe exept a small female that was waiting for the other male ho was his mate to return, thunder started to fall up on the trees, she waited and waited, until the storm had passed, then when they all went looking for him all they found was a carcas floating in the river, a large tree had fallen on the young parasaurolophus and fell in to the river, he could not lift the heavy tree and had drowned, at this horrific sigth the small female cried an along with the rest it let out a sound a cry filed with sadness, its mate was dead.
After a week they finally got to the south of sorna, when they layed ther eggs the other male guarded them form oviraptor he even guarded the eggs that weren’t his, and when they hatched he raised them and cared about them as if they where his own
When I left sorna I discovered that dinosaurs aren’t the savage monsters people think they are they are kind animals that have feelings, they think they love, they fell sadness, they react almost as a human beings would react, they have souls.
by mee catzilla
if you liked it coment if you want another chapter i have many ideas
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MemberCompsognathusJul-03-2014 10:24 PMi liked it, i could see it becoming a full fledged story.
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-04-2014 2:44 AMNice job, this one will be hard to top.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-04-2014 5:59 AMthanks mr.happy i can write beter i did this one in half and houer
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MemberAllosaurusJul-04-2014 7:48 AMAs Mr.Happy said, this will be hard to top. You have a good chance of winning.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-04-2014 7:54 AMthanks for the compliment syfy king im writing another page now, i want it to be at least 3 pages long or more.