Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:18 PMTitanovenator Kenyaensis vs Tyrannosaurus rex
Tyrannosaurus rex:
This is a 55 ft, 22 ft, 9 ton large Bull, now a father. Seen fighting a Torvosaurus and Shunosaurus earlier. Very experienced, but has trouble navigating tough terrain. Unbelievably powerful, as with all Rexes. Bite rivals even the largest Megalodon. Decently quick, smart, and this animal prefers to catch the rival by surprise mid-attack and use his devastating bite to show them who is the true king of the island.
VS.
Titanovenator Kenyaensis
This a 47 ft, 17 ft tall, 7.5 ton extremely large individual, an adult male. Decently experienced and on the look out for his first territory. Extremly fierce and as with all abelisaurs, extremely fast and astonishing jumpers. This individual prefers ambush/surprise headbutts and bites. A very fierce and ruthless individual.
A lone Titanovenator leans back and rests on a rocky cliff ledge on Isla Nublar, watching the storm clouds roll in. His legs are curled underneath him, his long muscular tail stretched out behind him, His reinforced skull and thick neck pulled to the sky. He sniffs the misty, wet air, and lightning flashes through the light grey sky. He starts to close his eyes as he stares into the storm. The relaxing sound of puddles dripping all around him. He looks at one of his 3 toed footprints filled with rain-water now, and started to doze. However, he closed his eyes too soon to notice ripples appear in the puddle of his footprint, in beat-like rhythm. The same beat as footsteps. An impact tremor.
Meanwhile, a Bull Tyrannosaurus rex, covered in scars from multiple battles, including one with a Torvosaur and Shunosaurus, watches the intruder. He lets a deep, yet quiet growl. His mate lets a small bark to let him know that she’ll watch the chicks while he defends the territory. She knows him and she knows what he’s thinking. The chicks let a whimper of fear for their father, before being whisked into the undergrowth. The Tyrannosaurus rex charges out and lets a roar that shakes the island.
The abelisaur jolts awake and gets up, eyeing the larger predator. The T. rex roars to give the abelisaur one chance to leave before he will attack. The Titanovenator decides he wants the territory and sizes up the larger opponent. The T. rex flashes his teeth and knows this will be to the death. The T. rex notices that this is probably the only species on the island with smaller arms to size then tyrannosaurs. However, he sees the reinforced skull, extremely long legs, and the sharp teeth sticking out of strong jaws. He knows this will not be a long and hard figh that he might not make it out of.
The Titanovenator notices the T. rex’s larger size and is immediately nervous, but what really frightens him is the sheer power of the animal standing before him. It is literally rippling with muscle. Everything from the smaller forearms to the strong, heavily built legs. However the worst part is when he gets to the neck and head. 12 inch fangs and a huge muscular neck with a giant head to top it off, show that this animal is built for crushing through anything in its path. However, he wants the prime territory and shoves the fears to the back of his mind.
The abelisaur roars first, a high pitched shriek that sounds like a hawk shrieking and a bull’s charging cry. The Tyrannosaurus immediately counters with en even louder bellow. A deep bellow that outcompetes the thunder and shakes the ground. The kenyan hunter steps back in surprise, then hunkers down for a fight. The T. rex continues to roar as he suddenly charges and slams his head into the ribs of his opponent.
The sharp crack of ribs echoes through the storm, the slap of the injury following the crackle of nearby lightning. The Titanovenator shakes the pain away and hops onto a nearby rocky outcrop. The tyrannosaur swivels around to face his opponent.... Only to find the titan hunter hurtling towards him, head down, legs pinned, and neck locked. The impact from the Titanovenator’s head throws the T. rex back a couple feet, and the tyrant reptile king hunkers down and skids near the cliff-face, claws shrieking against rock. He tries to locate the african abelisaur and finds the smaller, yet lightning fast dinosaur on top of another rock outcrop. Once again, the Titanovenator lunges forward and jumps through the air, head swiveling down and headbutting the Tyrannosaur. The T. rex jumps back. The Titanovenator continues to do this many times as the storm rages on. One of the Tyrannosaurus’ shoulder-blades is shattered, the arm beyond use, 9 ribs are cracked, fractured, or broken, and an ankle is fractured from trying to recover footing so many times. The abelisaur is too quick too get a good attack on now, especially in his injured state. The mighty king’s head now hangs low, weary and tired, barely able to keep standing. He shakes his head side to side and manages to lift the massive skull once again to see two things. The Titanovenator staring him down from the highest rocky outcrop/plateau yet, ready to make the final kill... and one of his chicks. He immediately sees the abelisaur notice it, and it bares its teeth. Still exhausted and head hanging to the ground, the T. rex manages to swivel around slowly to put himself between the predator and his young feathered prodigy. The baby has escaped the safe-cave her mother brought her to, and went to see her father. She now squeals and shrieks in surprise and slips, falling to the ground on the shaky, pebbly rock. She whimpers and sees her father’s massive foot come down in front of her.
The Titan hunter growls and recoils, ready for the final lunge, to kill the father, and then his chick. Meanwhile, as the hunter prepares to jump, the T. rex dad looks over to see his chick, nearly knocked out and whimpering softly. He realizes he is the only thing stopping the predator from killing his family, his next generation. He looks at his young feathered daughter’s big eyes, and she almost gives a little nod before falling asleep with a whimper. The T rex’s head snaps up as the Titanovenator lunges forward, this time jaws open, craving the kill. The abelisaurs jaws crank open lunging for the father’s throat....
as the T. rex jumps out of the way, grabs the abelisaur out of mid-air, and spins it around, changing its direction, and throwing it to the side, without the titan hunter ever touching the ground. The abelisaur roars in pain and rolls, tumbling head over heel over and over again, until it nearly rolls off the cliff. The Bull T. rex is upon them before it even knows what’s happening. The titan hunter roars at the Tyrant lizard King and manages to get up, snapping at the father. The father kicks the abelisaur in the knees, knocking its legs out from under it.
The Tyrannosaurus rex roars as it charges forward, the footsteps rumbling the mountaintop, lightning reflecting off the massive fangs and eyes, which are now full of hatred and bloodlust. He wants to kill the intruder, this is now personal, the predator attacked his family, and he is going to end this. With the iconic, terrifying attack roar, he rushes forward and grabs the Titanovenator Kenyaensis by the spine and neck, lifts the struggling animal into the air, and bites down as hard as he can. This snaps the neck and spinal column, paralyzing it and slowly killing it . The neck vertebrae puncture the skin snap up into the air. The Titanovenator realizes in horror what a mistake he has made, and now he is going to suffer the consequences. Now, he can’t even fight back, he can’t even move. The Tyrannosaurus rex, king of the predators spins the Titanovenator Kenyaensis through the air then throws it into a rocky outcrop, the impact alone shattering bones and rupturing/puncturing internal organs again, as it slowly stares in horror, motionless at the monster he has disturbed, blood dripping from the scarred Tyrannosaurus’ massive fangs, teeth and eyes glinting in the lightning, and as the T. rex roars into the stormy sky, lightning flashes, silhouetting the gargantuan predator, in all its power. Jaws cranked open, teeth bared and flashing, massive jaws set on a powerful neck, capable of biting through steel, tilted towards the stormy, grey sky. Then the paralyzed, once proud and powerful predator slides off the cliff-face to its doom.
WINNER: TYRANNOSAURUS REX
The terrain was against the Tyrannosaur, and definitely a help to the abelisaur, but his fatherly instinct, intelligence, and sheer unbelievable power pulled the Tyrannosaurus rex back out on top.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 8:23 PMWell knowing you the outcome was expected.
Have you read the finale of my story by any chance?
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Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:26 PMWhat do you mean by that? I have had Rex in only 2 fights and he won both. I believe the father instinct helped him pull out.
And yes. It was good, but as you warned, very abrupt.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 8:27 PMWell, you love Rex so I knew who was going to win.
It wasn't THAT abrupt...
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Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:40 PM1) I love Rex, but its still an animal. Notice that the Rex was kind of getting his ass kicked at the beginning of the fight. All animals have ups and downs.
And 2) it was pretty abrupt. Still a great story though.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 8:42 PMOkay, but still, you made Rex win. Also, it still wasn't THAT abrupt, I mean TOm was just fighting in self defense!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:45 PMA fight has many factors that us writers put into them Raptor. Rex was pretty much getting his ass kicked for the majority, but the youngster injured kind of sways the out come of the fight.
Glad you finally got this up here primal, well written and expertly crafted, Nice job
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:45 PMYes, but in a fair way. This is his second fight, whats so bad about that? You seem hostile about it.
And I know. It was abrupt though. I didnt say the ending was bad, just quick.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:48 PMThank you Carnosaur. Yeah, the terrain assisted the Titanovenator, and abused the Rex so it kind of screwed him over in the beginning. The baby definitely snapped him out of it and put his eye back on the ball. Thanks for the compliment! Means alot coming from a legend like you. You might be DinoFights quality. ;)
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 8:49 PMYAH, NORMALLY I HAVE EVERYTHING FAST PACED.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:52 PMDon't get mad. Wow. I said I enjoyed the story. Easy Raptor
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 8:53 PMOh, sorry, I had Caps Lock on lol.
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Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:55 PMOh, ok. I thought you were really angry. Just making sure.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 8:56 PMyah, sorry if I made you feel weird.
It takes a LOT to get me ANGRY on this forum, so don't worry.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 8:59 PMOk. Just making sure. Its fine, we're okay. ;)
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 9:02 PMYah, we are fine now.
Now that I think about it, the only time where I have gotten really ANGRY before was when on the status board some user just started calling me cuss words and to go ****with some user called junkered and he was just saying really offensive things to me so I got mad and reported him.
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Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 9:04 PMI witnessed that. He was probably some 11 year old, just trying to act older. We all went through that as*hole stage.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 9:07 PMYup, true story. When I was 9 and 10 I thought being a complete d*ck to every single living creature on this planet would make me cool...
God... Why... Did... I... Have... To... Be... So... Stupid...
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Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-24-2014 9:08 PMWhat a fight, what a fight...
Primal King, I loved the choice of words you used to portray the power and strength of each creature. The ending had the greatest imagery I had ever read in any dinosaur story written by someone else. That male Rex is the undisputed KING, and no one would ever come between a King and his heirs.
I do suggest editing the sentence structure though. I saw that there were several run-on sentences where I lost track of what exactly was happening, but this is something that anyone can do. I edit all my chapters of The Tyrant's Roar, and even though there are a few run-on sentences and spelling mistakes (because we're human, and making mistakes is our forte), editing does do wonders.
Also, I think that the lengths of the animals were a bit too big. A 55 foot T.rex? I'd love to see it, but even UCMP would have to live about 70-80 years before reaching that length, and the oldest T.rex found died at 29 or 30. And there is simply not enough evidence to provide a reasonable estimate for the length of a Titanovenator. There isn't enough information to claim such large sizes of each animal, but I do love the fact that they COULD have been such giants.
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 9:08 PMSame here. But its not called stupidity. Its called learning. ;)
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-24-2014 9:12 PMIt is learning, and having an active imagination. Each one of the greatest visionaries had imagination to go with their knowledge and ideas.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-24-2014 9:12 PMWell then I wish learning didn't make you facepalm yourself every time you think about your past...
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-24-2014 9:14 PMRaptor-401, was that last comment directed at me or Primal King?
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 9:17 PM@Alphadino. Wow! Thanks! I was kind of on a clock writing this, so that explains the run on sentences. As for the size thing, many recent rexes have been found that are awaiting further description. These bump up averages, and just sizes in general. Possibly up to 60 ft. But thanks again!
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 9:18 PMBut thank you! What a compliment!
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-24-2014 9:23 PMPrimal King, I would love to know more about these new T.rex specimens. I have not heard of any new ones, but finding out that T.rex was could have been bigger than we thought, and more massive than most carnivores would be the greatest dinosaur news I have heard in a while.
If these new specimens are in fact as big as we think we do, T.rex would regain it's position and title as the largest carnivorous dinosaur that ever lived!!
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 9:27 PMYes. Yes the would. My boss (a paleontologist) actually worked on a 6 ft 3 Rex skull and it immediatley changed his way of thinking on T. rex size. I'll get the data together tonight and PM you tomorrow. Ok? But that puts my male Rex as a large yet still in the barely average sized area.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-24-2014 9:41 PMSure thing.
PM means you send a message into my inbox, right?
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 9:58 PMthanks, primal. I'm not entirely sure about the whole dinofights quality thing, but i do take pride in them :)
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-24-2014 10:23 PM@Alphadino, yes thats what PM means. I will send the data to you tomorrow. But thanks again for all the kind words!
@carnosaur- thanks to you too, for the inspiration you gave me the past while in my fights. They were definitely a huge impact, so thanks man. And you definitely have the potential to become the next DinoFights. Just keep it up! You honestly porbably have some of the best fights on the forum. You should take pride in them!
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)