
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:03 PMChapter 5
A Second Chance
Three days have passed since Bruiser and Mag died. Star and Brush are having trouble surviving. The brothers had to leave their old oasis for another one they’ve been to on occasion before. They haven’t eaten a lot for a while and are having trouble finding water. But they are surviving. Star and Brush are resting when a lizard comes across them. Star perks up, knowing this lizard would make a good meal. He gets up and begins to circle around it. This way, he cuts off the lizard’s retreat. Brush comes in from behind. The lizard looks from one brother to the next, unsure of what to do. Star leaps forward and plants his foot on the back of the lizard, holding it in place. Brush then comes in and bites the struggling lizard on the head and pulls back. He tosses the head away and the brothers begin to feed. As they finish the carcass, they move on. They need to find water and soon. They head a few miles east. They vaguely remember there being a watering hole there and decide it’s worth it. When they arrive, they have the whole pond all to themselves. They begin to quench their thirst immediately. This accomplished, the brothers start to play, something they haven’t done in a while.
After a few hours of play, Star and Brush are very tired and rest. They curl up in some bushes and try to got to sleep. Brush falls asleep immediately, but Star has a little more trouble. Suddenly, he catches whiff of something approaching the pond. He scans the area to see what it was. But it was more than one something. Sickle and the raptor gang approach the pond to quench their thirst. It’s the whole gang except for the alpha female who is back at the nests, watching her eggs. The gang is over twenty members strong. Star hopes they don’t notice him and Brush. But that hope is soon shattered. Brush starts to wake up and when he sees the Velociraptors, he lets out a cry for help, forgetting their parents are gone. The raptors hear him and head for the bushes. Sickle towers over the brothers and snarls at them. As he leans down to kill them, another dinosaur slams into him and sends Sickle flying. That other dinosaur was Vega. The raptor gang screeches at Vega and the Alectrosaurus roars back. Sickle gets up and shakes his head a bit in an effort to get his focus back. He looks at his gang and gives the signal to retreat. He’s dealt with Vega before and knows he’s a fierce fighter. As the raptors leave, Vega looks at the young Tarbosaurus’. Star and Brush roll over in a sign of respect. Vega nods in approval then motions for them to follow him. Star and Brush exchange glances, then follow.
About an hour later and they are in Vega’s territory. It’s about fourteen square miles of desert dotted with a number of oasis’. He leads the brothers to the largest oasis, right in the center of his territory. Small animals are everywhere here and there is a decent sized watering hole. It’s the perfect place for Star and Brush to live. While not the ideal situation, it’s better than nothing. Star and Brush finally have someone who can help take care of them and a new home.
As night approaches, Star and Brush curl up to go to sleep. Vega sleeps a few yards away. With Vega watching over them, they will have a peaceful night and get plenty of sleep. Life is finally looking up for the brothers.

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 7:07 PMGood chapter. Sounds kinda like Storm and Synca.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:08 PMHello Synca, I mean Vega. Great chapter, but it seems that you follow a pattern. Lose parents, while young, almost die of raptor, othe. Tyrannosaur comes in and saves the day. Later revenge will come.
Hi

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:13 PMWell, this is part of the same sereis after all Delta ;)
Glad you guys liked it.

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:18 PMThe way I see it, its a redo of Fight to Survive, just with a with a diferent cast and a slightly changed plot.
Hi

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 7:29 PMKinda. I did my best to make my two stories different, I think I succeeded.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:33 PMYou'll see more changes later.
PS- The next two installments will be very different. Woops, did I just say that?

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:35 PMLet me guess, Daspletosaurus and, hmm, another tyrannosaur.
Hi

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 7:38 PMBeing your "advisor," I do believe I know what you mean.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:41 PMYou probably do MrHappy.
And Delta, I will say you are wrong ;)

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 7:45 PMRex Fan, you lose all credibility when you say someone is wrong..... Haha. This is your story, so only you can truly say someone is wrong about it.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:48 PMUsing my own words against me. Well played ;)
But yes, in this case, I can safely say that, haha

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 7:52 PMI hate when that happens honestly, but as a joke it's fine.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 7:55 PMWow, I'm really having a hard time not saying what the next two stories are about. Stay strong Rex Fan, stay strong.

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 8:00 PMYou can do it, stay strong!
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 8:02 PMThanks for the encouragement. I'll just pretend if I say it, I'll be eaten by a pack of Ceratosaurus'.

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexDec-02-2013 8:04 PMGood idea, and if you do say, I'll act surprised
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-02-2013 8:19 PMFigured this would be good motivation...

DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusDec-03-2013 9:42 AMVery good chapter RexFan. The change of the cast is itself almost enough to keep me interested. So, I really consider it another story.
So, good job, and can't wait for your next stories! ;)
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusDec-03-2013 3:49 PMGlad you liked it DinoSteve :)

DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusDec-03-2013 3:52 PMGlad you're glad, haha.
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