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Terrance's Story: New Word Chapter 14

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexNovember 26, 2013942 Views8 Replies

Here's a chapter I've been dying to post. Not sure what else to say, please don't hate me for leaving off where I did.

 

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Separation

A few years since they had first met Sammy and Tommy, Terrance and Thorn are a little bored, and go looking for something to do. None of the small animals stick around long enough for them to catch them, and the big animals are threatened by them because they've seen Terrance hunting and fighting.

Terrance and Thorn decided to go around the border of their territory, having nothing better to do. When they were about halfway through the patrol, they sensed something that was off. They went to check it out, and it was large Torvosaurus that was lying in wait for something. Terrance watched, interested in what this new predator was capable of before attacking it. It suddenly rushed out into the clearing and attacked an Edmontosaurus. Terrance watched as it pushed the Edmontosaurus down, stepped on its neck, and bit it's head.

Thorn looked at Terrance, and he looked back, and they nodded before turning to the Torvosaurus. Terrance stepped out of the tree line, and Thorn was going to come out if Terrance needed help. What they didn't know, was that there was a second Torvosaurus. Terrance roared at the first Torvosaurus, and it looked back at him and roared back. Terrance and the Torvosaurus walked in circles, sizing each other up. Terrance saw the Torvosaurus was large, about forty feet long and six tons.

Meanwhile, the second Torvosaurus had found Thorn, and it attacked without warning. Thorn had sensed it, and managed to avoid the full force of the attack. She looks at the second Torvosaurus, and she sees this as her chance to prove herself to Terrance. They get into a shoving match, and Thorn's extra couple tons helped. She shoved the Torvosaurus through the forest, and before either of them knew it, they were far away from the clearing.

Terrance and the first Torvosaurus charged, and the Torvosaurus stumbled back, and Terrance charged again. The Torvosaurus got out the way and bit Terrance's back, right next to the section of his spine that was exposed. Terrance roared in pain, and managed to pull out, and the Torvosaurus charged. Terrance had faced it, and he headbutted the Torvosaurus. Terrance bit the Torvosaurus on the head, and bit down full force, taking a chunk of the Torvosaurus's head when he pulled back.

The second Torvosaurus and Thorn were fighting, and the Torvosaurus bit her arm. Just before it pulled back, Thorn bit it's neck, and it let go of her arm, giving her some room to move around. She continued biting its neck, and she slammed its head into a tree. When she let go, the Torvosaurus dropped, and Thorn bit it's neck to make sure it was dead. She looked at her kill, proud of what she just did, now she has to find Terrance and show him that she can fight too.

Terrance looked where Thorn had been, and he didn't see her, so he got worried. He heard a sudden roar, and thought it was just Thorn calling for him, so he walked to where it came from. There was a second and third roar, and Terrance began to pick up the pace, getting very worried about what was happening.

 

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DinoSteve93
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Great chapter, I love it! You created at the very end, a lot of suspense, so I really enjoyed this chapter.

Well done! ;)

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Nice. Time to see how this all plays out.

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Lord Vader
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Three comments, from the same three guys, who have been posting on the last 5(?) chapters. I wonder if anyone would notice if I stopped posting, and just PMed this to you two?

 

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Don't forget Delta and tyrantlizardking and tyrant. I'm sure they read it.

"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98
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I bet much more people saw it. The thing is, not all people comment.

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Lord Vader
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I know, I'd still rather if the commented even every three or even four chapters, just because then you know they are reading it. I was actually expecting more people this time around because there was a battle and something happened to Thorn.

Oh well, life goes on, big battle in chapter 20, hopefully there are comments from more than just us three on that one. Same for chapter 22 because it's the last. Then again, Part 9 of Terrance's Story only had 4 comments, 4!

 

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DinoSteve93
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That could be even worse... think how would it be if neither me or RexFan would comment on your chapters!

Personally, I would be very disappointed, there's much work in making a story!

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I know, and I kinda am.

 

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