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MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 2:21 PMChapter 2
Early Teachings
Kano and Longtooth are leading Storm to the nearest watering hole. It’s a hot day and they family needs to stay hydrated. After they quench their thirst, Kano decides it’s time to teach his son how to do some hunting. They will start simple. “First, we will catch some fish,” Kano thinks to himself. While not expert fishers, tyrannosaurs are capable of catching them. Storm watches his father intently. Kano squats as low to the ground as he can. He remains absolutely still. Then, when the timing is just right, he lunges forward. His great jaws snap shut and a three foot long Coelacanth is brought up from the lake. These fish are migrating into local rivers and lakes from the ocean to spawn. They are here in plenty. Kano drops the fish in front of his mate who touches his nose and proceeds to eat the offering. Kano returns to Storms and repeats the process one more time. He catches another large Coelacanth and eats it himself. The message is clear, “You want lunch? Then you’ll have to catch it yourself.” As cruel as it may sound, Kano knows it’s the best way to teach Storm how to fend for himself. Storm walks to the edge of the lake and mimics his father with surprising accuracy. He spots a huge five footer and lunges. He grabs the fish by the dorsal fin. But it’s twice his size and easily escapes, but not without first smacking Storm across the face with it’s tail. The young tyrannosaur tries again. He zeroes in on a more suitably sized fish. Once again, he lunges forward. Missed. Storm is beginning to get frustrated. He looks to his father for encouragement. Kano touches noses with his son and continues to watch. With renewed vigor, Storm tries one more time. He sees it. A perfect sized specimen. Not too big and not too small. He launches forward and his jaws encircle the struggling fish. He drags it onto shore and looks at his father who gives the nod of approval. They continue to catch fish until they can eat no more. Storm has had his first lesson in hunting and how to survive. But there will be many more to come.
The next part of Storm’s teachings is about learning how to ambush prey. His mother shows him the proper position. When she is sure he has it right, she allows him to try and actually catch something. As he assumes the position, Longtooth backs off so he has the room and solitude he requires. A small lizard eventually appears. Storm prepares for the attack. The lizard is completely unaware of Storm’s presence. The time comes and Storm pounces. He plants a foot on the lizard’s back and bites the back of it’s neck. The small reptile struggles a little, but soon lies still. Storm has successfully made his first ambush. Kano arrives and watches as young Storms begins to feed. He looks to Longtooth. Through the complex relationship between tyrannosaur parents, he is able to basically say, “He’s a fast learner.” Storm is a fast learner indeed. Tomorrow, he will join his parents on a hunt. Of course he won’t participate, he’s still only about three feet long. But he will learn a lot.
Today is the day. The day Storm joins his parents on the hunt. They decided to choose large, but relatively easy to catch prey. The dinosaur of choice, Edmontosaurus. At forty feet long and over ten thousand pounds in weight, they are big, but harmless vegetarians. Storm climbs on top of a large boulder situated at the top of a hill. From here, he can see the whole herd. They are feeding in a large clearing surrounded by a thick line of trees. He watches as his father takes up a position on the far side. His mother is taking up an ambush position on the other side. The tactic is simple, but extremely effective. At the right moment, Longtooth roars at the top of her lungs and charges. The hadrosaurs begin to run for the trees. Longtooth zeros in on a limping animal. She chases it directly toward Kano. Storm watches as Kano leaps out of the forest and plows the dinosaur into the ground. He kills it with a quick bite to the back of the neck. Storm joins his parents for a feast. What he has just witnessed leaves a permanent impression on him. He will forever remember this strategy.
Kano and Longtooth watch as Storm approaches the kill. The tyrannosaur family feasts as a flock of small pterosaurs begin to circle like vultures. Their presence alerts all the predators in the area that an animal has died. Soon, a predatory Nanotyrannus has arrived. This smaller cousin of Tyrannosaurus, this one is named Synca, is no match for a fully grown Tyrannosaurus, let alone two. At sixteen feet long and about a thousand pounds, he’s a fraction of their size. He is about to leave when he notices the baby tyrannosaur. Synca makes a mental note of this. He tries to remember every animal in the area. That way, he can easily know if one is friend or foe. Young Storm is a new addition and Synca will not soon forget him.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98
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Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 2:35 PMDu du du. Ominous foreboding. I love it. It is amazing. If you are going to make this into a book, then I think it will be a great book.
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 2:37 PMThis was pretty good. I wonder how Synca will come into play.
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 2:42 PMDelta, that's actually what I had in mind when I first thought of this. After I brought it up to MrHappy, he suggested I put it on the JP site. It's much longer, or at least looks longer, on google docs, haha
Glad to see you guys are excited for the rest of it.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 2:53 PMThe fonts bigger for one thing, haha. The basic part is done. I plan on adding a few details here and there to the main story. Nothing much, an extra sentence here and there to "beef it up" a bit.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 2:55 PMI think that people write much better story's when they like the character in it. Take me for example. My Utahraptor and Deltadromeus story are my best yet. And they are also my two favorite dinosaurs.
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 2:55 PMI am doing some editing in Part 9 of Terrance's Story, and I am pretty happy with how it ends.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 2:57 PMTrue. Because I know more about T-rex than any other dinosaur, it's easy for me to come up with an entertaining story that is also a good length.
Course there are some creative additions to the story. Them fishing for one. The migrating Coelacanths for another.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 2:59 PMIt is possible for Rex to fish though. Maybe a big sluggish fish, but possible none the less.
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Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:00 PMWell you can't have an interesting story without a few additions.
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:02 PMExactly. Need them here or there.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:07 PMIt even better when it could accually happen. I mean, does a Deltadromeus fish, I think not. But it could.
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:09 PMYeah, it's possible. The migrating part is purely speculation. I don't think modern Coelacanths do that, but perhaps their prehistoric cousins did.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 3:10 PMMaybe they did migrate back then. Another thing is that I don't think that a Rex that was only a few days old would be able to even watch a hunt.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:13 PMYeah, but if I had to give it something. Otherwise you'd be reading about a baby T-rex sleeping and eating all day. Exciting, haha.
I wanted to get it started as soon as possible, but decided to wait until the second chapter at least.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:14 PMMaybe, but it would have to stay alert even as a kid. I think the early rexes didn't have that, but as time goes on, they evolved it.
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:19 PMPerhaps. The world of the dinosaurs was very dangerous. If you did not learn fast, you were as good as dead.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:22 PMYou know, I wouldn't mind watching a T. rex eat, sleep, and explore his world. As long as it is in first person.
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:27 PMThat would be cool. Watching that is. Reading might be a bit difficult unless the writer is really good.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:29 PMThat would be an awesome video game. I'd play it.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:34 PMI want a game like primal carnage but with these dinosaurs in first person: Sinorthosaurus, Dienonychus, Ceratosaurus, triceratops, Daspletosaurus, Giganotosaurus. I think I will make a discussion on it.
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 3:37 PMGo for it. I like Daspletosaurus and Ceratosaurus a lot. Next to Tyrannosaurus, they are among my favorite dinosaurs.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 4:19 PMThat is a great idea. It could be educational too. There could be a bar for hunger, health, breath, and a picture that shows a skeleton, with any broken bones in red.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 4:25 PMIt's violent, it's educational, but mostly violent. Yay violence.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 4:36 PMIn my opinion, it should at least be historically accurate. Left to me, it would be the most accurate game available, and rated 13+ at a minimum because of blood and gore.
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 4:40 PMSingle player would be accurate. Online multiplayer would be an all out brawl with whatever species you choose. Internet connection would not be necessary for single player, but yes for multiplayer. Then it would be rated M because of online because people can get mad about everything. Now that I think about it, online is a bad idea.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-24-2013 4:44 PMOnline might be pushing it. I think T would be a good rating. Similar to Jurassic Park The Game or Jurassic Park Operation Genesis.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98

Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-24-2013 5:49 PMI thought so too
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