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Season 1: Episode 5, The Final Battle

Deltadromeus

MemberCompsognathusJuly 03, 20131679 Views7 Replies
Our Utahraptor is lonely without a mate, but he knows that he can try again next year. A loud cry pierces the air, and our Utahraptor recognizes it, its his sister. The cry abruptly stops, and the Utahraptor sprints to where the sound came from. When he gets there, he sees a horrific sight, an Acrocanthosaurus with a mangled nose and a scar on the side of its face is holding his dead sister in its jaws. The Utahraptor recognizes him immediately, it is the Acrocanthosaurus who killed his father, his oldest sister, gave his mother a limp which led to her death, and now killed his only living family member, and also his closest. At the sight of his older sister in the Acrocanthosaurus's jaws, something snaps in him. He has had too much loss, and now it is all being released in one huge flood. The Utahraptor makes a beeline for the Acro's throat, who throws his sisters carcass to the side, but the Utahraptor is too fast for Acro and bites down on its throat. The Acro roars and tries to shake him off, but the only thing Utahraptor is doing is slashing at Acrocanthosaurus's throat with his claws. Acro finally manages to shake the Utahraptor off, but the Utahraptor just jumps onto the side of the Acrocanthosaurus and drives his long claws into him. The Acro shakes around, eventually throwing the Utahraptor off, the Acrocanthosaurus walks over to the Utahraptor and bites down on him, Utahraptor screams in pain, but the Acro is too old and is already tiring from the blood loss, and can't crush the Utahraptor. Acro lets go and is about to step on Utahraptor when the Utahraptor gets up, lunges forwards, despite the pain, and creates a large gash on the inside of Acro's leg. Utahraptor then backs up, readying to jump, when the hand of Acrocanthosaurus crashes into the snout of our Utahraptor. Utahraptor is in a great deal of pain now, but he still jumps onto the Acrocanthosaurus's back, and mimics his father's attack by gripping the Acro with his hand claws and raking his feet across the Acro's back. The Acro shakes Utahraptor off and uses the side of his head like a baseball bat to slam into the Utahraptor and send him flying several feet. The Utahraptor, in absolute agony, gets up, only to be hit by the Acro's sharp hand claws, which the force of the blow sends him staggering back. The Utahraptor now only has one plan left, but is in so much excruciating pain that it is hard to focus, then he looks at the dead body of his final family member and all the rage comes back to him. He musters up all his strength, and prepares to jump as the Acro comes charging forwards with his mouth agape. Utahraptor jumps at the last second and lands right where the neck meets body. Utahraptor turns around and starts clawing at the back of Acro's neck. Acro roars in pain, but manages to shake the Utahraptor off. He then runs. Utahraptor painfully gets up and follows the Acrocanthosaurus. The Acro eventually stops and turns around, but Utahraptor jumps onto the back of Acro, he changes direction and keeps clawing at the place he was before, only this time, he is also biting at it and tearing small chunks off. The Acrocanthosaurus shakes Utahraptor off and hits him with his long hand claws. Utahraptor keeps coming and one again jumps onto the back of Acrocanthosaurus and continually attacks the same spot. Acro now runs with the Utahraptor on him, shaking to get him off. Utahraptor is grabbing the Acro with his claws now and tearing large chunks, meat out, but he is not eating it. The Acro stops running again, and shakes constantly, and he throws the Utahraptor off. He walks over too where the Utahraptor landed by the edge of a small slope. As Acro puts his foot on the Utahraptor and applies his weight in order to crush it, some soft solid gives way, letting the Utahraptor slide down the slope, with Acro tumbling down behind him. They shortly arrive near a river, but their momentum keeps them going right into it. They keep going down stream until they hit a bend in the river and wash up onto the shore. Utahraptor painfully gets up and sees Acro do the same. When the Acrocanthosaurus gets up, he starts running at top speed away from the Utahraptor, but Utahraptor follows. It takes a while for the Utahraptor to catch up to Acro, but he eventually does. Still running, he jumps and lands on the back of Acrocanthosaurus, then he sees what he has been working on, he sees the spine of the Acro, just why he was digging in the flesh. The Acro slows down and starts shaking viciously. Utahraptor, barely holding on, manages to get his foot on the spine, but before he can do anything, is shaken off. Utahraptor hits the ground hard. He is barely moving, and the Acro takes him for dead, and as he is going to take a bite out of the raptor, Utahraptor, with all his remaining strength gone, remembers his dead family members. This fills him with rage once again, and strength once again,and jumps onto the neck of Acro, as quick as a flash, he thrusts his foot down, and his toe claw cuts right through the disk in between the vertebra, literally decapitating the Acrocanthosaurus. With both his spine and spinal cord severed, he falls, dead. The Utahraptor is barely standing up when he gives a triumphant roar. Utahraptor then looks around to see where he is. He then sees three old eggs, three old Utahraptor eggs, three old Utahraptor eggs alined in such a way they it seems familiar. Then one final memory hits him, looking out onto the world for the first time, seeing his two sisters, his mother, his father with a dead Tentontosaurus, our Utahraptor has made it home, he has killed the animal that plagued him for so long at the same place it killed his father. Utahraptor now feels happy about his life and gets down to sleep, for the last time. Credits Author: Deltadromeus15 Co-author: Deltadromeus15 Publisher: Jurassic Park 4 forum Special thanks to: Jurassic Fight Club, for teaching me about Utahraptor. Michael Crichton, if you didn't write Jurassic Park, this forum wouldn't be up. Walking With Dinosaurs, for giving me the inspiration to write this. Scified, for having this forum and showing my work on it. You, for reading this. The baby Utahraptor now turns around in time to see his father attack the Acrocanthosaurus. [img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/015/e/9/baby_raptor_adoptable_test_by_thecheesecannibal-d377lx4.png[/img] Feeling this, the young Utahraptors abandon the adult, who collapsed, to die in time to see the intruding female jump onto the mother Utahraptor and bite her neck. [img]http://ichef.bbci.co.uk/naturelibrary/images/ic/credit/640x395https://scified.com/u/ut/utahraptor/utahraptor_1.jpg[/img] They find a suitable prey item and start forming a plan. [img]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_KAY0nKzVktI/TRlGapWfbiI/AAAAAAAAAJE/NUTopY6tLhE/s1600/10+Utahraptor.jpg[/img] With only two remaining, he turns around in time to see one jump onto his back and drive its claws into him. [img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/004/0/c/jp_utahraptor_vs_velociraptors_by_hellraptor-d4a612h.jpg[/img] The Utahraptor is barely standing up when he gives a triumphant roar. [img]http://images.wikia.com/dinosaurs/images/9/9e/Turok_Utahraptor.jpg[/img] The End [img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/045/4/d/Utahraptor_by_NunoPereira.jpg[/img]

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A very climatic end. I assume that the Utahraptor died in the end being that you said he went to sleep for the last time. Bitter sweet. Well done. Maybe next time you can add names. I can help you think of a few if you wish. Overall, well done.
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I love the series. Enjoyed the conclusion
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Wonderful end. I love it.
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As a dinosaur fight writer myself, I am amazed by this work. Truly a perfect combination of a story that was packed with suspense, action and tragedy and a climax that is unrivaled by any fight I've read. The end was very fitting and well thought out. Keep up the good work!
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YOU'RE BACK! Awesome! Welcome back. I hope everything is good with you and your son. This is great! DinoFights is back everyone! haha
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This was a good season. One thing though, you don't have to kill someone important to the main character every time. Either way, this was great. Can't wait for the next set/series/season.

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Oh, I completely know, but killing of the family just made it a bit better, and really helped the ending.

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