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Yes, I was inspired by Dinosaur Revolution

I really like your new version.

A divine tapestry the likes of which I have never seen.

^Awesome, I imagine that's how territorial bouts between Tyrannosaurs would go down.

Bellowing territoriality at the invading Rex family. Karn snapped his jaws closed soon afterwards. Gorg took a few steps forward before gaping his mouth open to roar in retaliation. Karn huffed before lunging forward, roaring and chomping at the air.

Gorg battered his massive jaws against Karn. Karn staggered, he swings his jaws on to Gorg's snout. The two male tyrannosaurus tug at each other, Gorg was attempting to free himself from Karn's bite while Karn used all of his weight to swing the rival tyrannosaurus to the ground. However Gorg wasn't going down without a fight, he jerks his head sideways, pain he felt as blood tinkled down his snout. He pulled with more force until, his snout was finally free, at the cost of the skin on his muzzle. 

Karn licked the blood off his teeth, he roars, wanting to bite Gorg once more. Gorg charged forward, he lowers his head to dodge Karn's bite, instead Gorg took a bite into Karn's chest. Karn snapped his jaws furiously at Gorg, Karn can feel his left arm scrapping against Gorg's tongue before he felt an agonizing crunch. 

Gorg pulled his head away, taking Karn's arm with it. Karn turned around to retreat, hearing Gorg roaring at him. Gorg snapped his jaws as the injured tyrannosaurus makes his escape. Regina and her offspring approach Gorg afterwards. Regina licking Gorg's wounded snout.

Great use of my characters and yours. Excellent work, damn straight.

That was pretty good. I like that it ended in a tie.

^If it landed a good blow to the head or neck it probably could’ve, put I’d say the Mosasaurus was more agile and possibly faster. Plus it has the benefit of genetic modifications. 

As much as I prefer FK to The Meg, I think Megalodon would win because it had the greatest bite force of all time.

The top 2 are Crichton's Jurassic Park and The Lost World, full stop.

Dragon Teeth may or may not be considered a "sci-fi" novel, but according to Crichton's letters, he always considered it to be the prequel to his "other dinosaur book".

Hey I was going to say Jurassic Park but then my PC took an arrow to the knee

^Same. 

Although I can’t say I’ve read many dinosaur books. 

That was sad conclusion to your story. I did like the epilogue.

Pretty interesting one-shot. Surprised that you killed all of your characters though.

Easy. Jurassic Park by Michael Crichton for me.

Hey you forgot the Great Oxygen Catastrophe 

Edit: damn i double posted!

I can't harm a velociraptor or any Dromaeosaurid, they are noble creatures

I would probably die. I figure the thing would have been stalking me and been a smart hunter. The best I could hope for is a lucky kill shot at the last second.

Given your rules in the real world, we would be at the mercy of animals on their own turf unless for blind luck. And some deserve their wrath:

Interesting read, Tyrannos. I haven't heard of the Orodovician extinction, until now.

^"I'm a survivor."

^Proterosuchus

^Can't wait for the next part.

Hey I posted a chapter to a Daily Life of a Tyrannosaurus and soon I'll be updating my JP fanfiction

A lot better than the fight we got in JP3.

That was pretty good, Tyrannos.

Divine, godly, every exaggerated vocabulary one could write—this is simply that good.

Glad they cut it, I mean I'm for the rematch but I don't think JWFK is the right time to do it.

Okay no more delays.

The following morning the Tyrannosaurus family left their nest, seeing now it was compromised by the acheroraptors. Gorg and Regina lead their children through the thick forests, over fallen tree trunks that were partially submerged in the creek beds, traversing dried up river beds that were now deep trenches to a shallow creek.

A lone Dakotaraptor stood silent among the thick tree's branches, Little Claw briefly looked up towards the trees but was pushed forward by Fast Foot's snout. Then came a familiar roar, out of sight and around the corner of the creek trench.

Regina huffed as she nudges her offspring to stay close to her as Gorg positions himself fowarded towards the roar. It was a challenging roar, that was for certain, Gorg watched vigilantly as another male tyrannosaurus came into view from around the bend.

Karn we will call him, his jaws were malformed possibly from an unsuccessfull attempt to hunt an ankylosaurus, his teeth stuck out jagged and un-uniformed. He was also rather thin for a tyrannosaurus, suggesting he hasn't had many successful hunts. Karn stared at the smaller tyrannosauruses for a moment before...

Yeah but the spinosaurus died.

Name: Exstailasaurus

Diet: Carnivorous (herbivores and smaller carnivores)

Natural Enemy: Tyrannosaurus Rex, Spinosaurus and Ankylosaurus.

Lenght: 30 meters

Height: 8 meters

DNA: Gigantosaurus, Indominus Rex, Human, Troodon, Pachycephalosaurus, Ankylosaurus, Spinosaurus, Lion, Bat, Velociraptor and Cuddle Fish.

Design: The main body is that of a Gigantosaurus, while possessing very long arms from the Indominus and five fingers from the Human. She has the tail of an an Ankylosaurus and the hard head of Pachycephalosaurus. She also has webbed feet from a Spino and a curved claw from the Velociraptor. Her claws on her hands are about 4 feet in length. 

Abilities: Echo-location, mobility in water, night vision hunting, venomous bite, very high intelligence, retractable claws, inpenetral hide and bite force of 6-9 tons.

Fence Height: 70 feet

Hoped you like my dinosaur :)

^

My favorite is probably the Nodosaurus. 

Quality list. T.rex would probably the pinnacle regardless for me.

Klayton Fioriti explains it. It's the Buck.

I think in a deleted scene some Velociraptors got onto the ship.  

I’m doing another hybrid

Name-fjaraptonyx

Meaning-feathered claw

Prounouced-Far-Raptor-onyx

Type-Carnivore

Length-15.7 metres

Height-6.9 metres

Weight-1 ton

Purpose-to guard an InGen base on Isla Sorna.

DNA-Oviraptor,Therizinosaurus,Indoraptor,Utahraptor,Mujungasaurus,Alloaurus,Shuchomimus,Modern Raven,Pit Viper.

Description-The Fjaraptoronyx Is extremely feathered and unusually aggressive, killing everything in it’s sight. It possesses 3 rows of 100 teeth, the first row for gripping slippery prey, second row for tearing through flesh, and a 4 row for sawing through bone. It also uses an unusually long neck to lash out quickly. It is one of the most intelligent creatures ever to have lived.they walk on both only their legs and with their arms.

Lifespan-89 years

Behavior- They mate once a year before leaving the offspring with the female.they will kill any thing in it’s territory.

Weapons-1  metre long razor-sharp claws  on both very long and powerful arms. Teeth contain poison that parylizes the bitten limb. Tail can be used as a whip. Thermal sensing.extreme intelligence and ability to lunge extremely far. Can slash with their feet.

Apperance- Body is completely feathered and possesses a number of quills on his back. Looks extremely similar to the therizinosaurus. Small beak on end of face. Forward facing eyes. A row of quills down his spine and a few on it’s arms and legs.fethers can be any colour, from navy blue with indigo stripes to blue underbelly,red back and a black streak and spots.

Securitly level- High

Weakness- none.

^Maybe. I heard its cry shortly before Rexy appeared in the opening.

Updated Opinion: Jurassic World is still awesome to this life long veteran Jurassic Park fanboy