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Can't really beat job security. 

TK, it's lies, all lies. The Rebellion is the way to go.

NO WAIT GUYS, YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THIS MEANS

There was a In cannon fiction novel about the Pteradons escaping and Making Nests in Universal Studios. 

THIS MEANS COLINS KEPT IT IN CANNON.

THATS FANTASTIC!

The DAF is the right side. Joing the Reblleion shall only lead to the Velocirapture...

TK, join the Rebellion, we have job security AND cookies.

Why not have one for a bird cage? That would be super cool!

how about when the tyrant king gets involved?

TK, observe the ostrich:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EUNeF7TG6sQ

Guys, don't get carried away. Just report all the problems to the Staff or to one of the moderators and we will make sure that the appropiate people handle the problem right away.

And the DAF is always prepared and shall enevr back down to Lord Vader.

got a little bit carried.

When writing stories, It's ok to change the tense sometimes. As long as each sentence has the same tense, it'll generally work out.

No, your tenses where fine.

The part that needs the most work, is the amount of excess detail you have thrown in.

One thing I like to do is read through my finished story, and see If there is anything that can be cut without damaging the story itself. A good example of this was when you gave the measurements of the first Deinocheirus that was slain. While factual and informative, it was also unneccesary, and could've been cut.

So, next time you write a fight, read through it, then read through it again, all the while keeping an eye open for these excessive details, and removing them when possible.

Also, good fight.

TK, I think you're getting a little carried away there... It's probably better to just let the staff handle these guys when they arrive. Best to not get in the way (speaking from experience but not on these forums elsewhere)

Canada? I was expecting Mexico or that to go unanswered but thanks for sharing! 

was it because it kept changing from ppast tense to present tense to past tense again?

we will have to stand together, side by side. we wilf fight them. we shall defend our island whatever the cost may be. we shall fight them on the beaches. we shall fight them on the landing ground. we shall fight in the feild and in the streets. we shall fight them in the hills. we shall never surrender!!!!!!!!!!!

Everything has disadvantages Anky. 

Yes, for now. 

Nice fight, I was rooting for Utahraptor.

Some advice now. Try to improve your grammar. The fight was great, but it may have flowed better with improved grammar. We all start somewhere though, and the only way to improve is to keep writing them.

Looking forward to your next fight. 

For now.

well... in a head to head fight, rex vs i rex, i rex would just win. I rex is the same as t rex except with more advantages and no disadvantages. But i think the people will find a way to let t rex win. Have you ever noticed how much more civilised this forum is compared to youtube? On youtube, there's people swearing, calling people b!tches over a winner and stuff like that. Luckily the forum is a LOT better. Well, for now at least.

 Appearently.

they went all the way up to canada?

DANIELOSAURUS - How very neat! Thank you for locating and sharing this with us! :)

DUSTYALASKA - Hahaha! That is so very CUTE! I love the little compartment door and night-light! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! :)

OH CRAP I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT VELOCIRAPTOR AWARNESS MONTH!!! OH WAIT I'M ON TEAM RAPTOR SO AM I A RAPTOR?!?!?! QUICK BARACADE THE DOORS AND MAN THE TURRETS!!! :O

So... Starlord and Hamada's boss? I guess he's Tokuma's boss as well...

Thanks guys! @x_paden_x, I am too, but I believe the Tech Demo will be released shortly after these updates are finished. (Gosh the pictures are really stretched out in the picture.)

I whole-heartedly agree with you @Silver_Falcon.

when you are hunting a sauropod and it knocks you over your gonna wish you had arms. And of course most preds could hunt a sauropod of approprivate size. 

Hahaha great....so long as the kid who gets the bottom bunk isn't claustrophobic!

Looks beautiful!

TYRANT KING - Hahaha! I understand exactly what you mean; better to have peace! :)

TK,, "lack of arms" doesn't denote abelisaurs as not sauropod hunters -- in fact any animal of appropriate size could theoreticaly do so,if it was driven to i supppose. Allosaurs just have better weaponry to desl with them (at least it has been proposed) then other theropods do.

I don't see how you say carnotaurus hunoted sauropods with its small teeth and very short jaws and lack of arms.

Just having a little fun. 

*sarcasticaly* Oh yeah! Another war! Can't wait!

TYRANT KING - It is alright! I am certain there will be another grand battle in the future! Just wait! ;)

I'm kind of sad that i missed the DAF vs rebel days.

Guys, stand down. This DAF and Rebellion stuff is over. Captain 2K, I'm in charge, this is my call. We are ready, as are you, so let's remain that way, but not take any action. 

Chris Pratt looking cool specially in his hunter vest, Best I found

at Sky-Seller online store.

patients is a virtue, though it sucks... you gotta relax, it will release when it does