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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:15 PMThis is my next story, it takes place after my T-Rex Vs. Giganotosaurus fight and my Spinosaurus Vs. Acrocanthosaurus fight. Here it is:
Isla Nublar: Apocalypse
Chapter 1: New Beginnings
The sun rose, shining over the abandoned park. Rexy, who had defeated a male Giganotosaurus, roared in triumph as she picked up her meal. Her bellow emanated through the lands.
Far away, deep inside the restricted area of the island, another Tyrannosaurus heard the call. This individual was a male named Tyrance, the first T-Rex ever discovered. Scars covered his body, especially his head, neck, and torso. He was also missing his right arm and lost the use of his right eye from a pile of debris.
Another T-Rex, the Volcano Rex, also heard the roar. He was Tyrance's long-time rival, having taken his arm. He, too heard Rexy's roar.
For Spinax and his family, the fall of Jurassic World meant freedom. He and his family had taken residence in one of the swamps of the island. Now, Spinax was returning to his mate and children with a dead Kaprosuchus in his jaws. The juveniles chirped and squealed as he lowered the corpse for them to eat.
Longtooth and Shark Fang broke out of their respective paddocks, hissing at each other. They headed in different directions. Longtooth headed for the Gyrosphere Valley while Shark Fang went to the Triceratops paddock.
In the valley, Longtooth saw other Giganotosaurs. She was the largest, and therefore became their alpha. She was happy, she was a queen.
Meanwhile, the Ultimus Rex was looking for a home. She headed to the Gyrosphere Valley due to a powerful scent filling her nostrils. She saw many dead Apatosaurs and began eating one. Longtooth was eating another of the sauropods and didn't notice her.
As all of this happened, Blue the Velociraptor was wandering through a forest, looking for a home. Her pack was dead, so she was going to have it rough. She lay down as she felt the ground beginning to shake.
Rexy, who had left the area, approached the Raptor. Both dinosaurs were still tired from the fight with the Indominus Rex, especially the Tyrannosaurus. The two lay down and rested, neither disturbing the other.
A month later
The Apatosaurus carcasses were rotting. The U-Rex had survived off them, evading Longtooth. Now, she was the size of Blue (if you don't include her sail. Remember, she's part Spinosaurus). The hybrid decided to test her skills, looking for a suitable target. The Ultimus walked into the Pachycephalosaurus Arena. There was only one Pachy. The two creatures confronted each other. They raked the dirt ground with their tow claws, preparing to charge. They ran at each other, banging heads. The U-Rex stumbled back, her skull wasn't designed for this. She roared, then lashed out with her Therizinosaurus claws. She made contact, hitting the herbivore in the neck. He stumbled back as the hybrid clamped onto his neck, continuing to slash him. Finally, he collapsed, severely weakened. The Pachycephalosaurus could only watch in horror as the Ultimus Rex sank one of her Raptor claws into his jugular vein, killing him. She roared in triumph, having won her first battle.
Chapter 2: Death of a Leader
Three years later
A herd of Triceratops grazed in one of Isla Nublar's many forests. In the bushes, a black foot stomped on the forest floor. It was the Ultimus Rex, and at 57 feet long and 27 feet tall, she was fully grown. She had grown into a hunter, a psychopath. She killed for sport and for food, murdering any animal she saw.
The hybrid scanned the herd with her blood red eyes. Looking for a suitable opponent, she locked onto the leader, an old bull Trike. The U-Rex charged, grabbing his right horn. The herd scrambled in fear, abandoning their leader. The herbivore bucked, freeing himself. The Ultimus stepped back, facing her opponent. He charged, but she sidestepped. His horn scraped her right shoulder, it wasn't fatal, but it hurt. This mistake would set in effect a chain of effects that would throw Nublar into chaos. All because he missed her chest cavity.
Now it was her turn to attack. The U-Rex swung her head, her horn hitting the Trike's shoulder. He roared, and she bit down on his frill. The hybrid twisted and turned, eventually breaking a piece off. In the process, his horns raked her chest, but she didn't care, she had caused him more pain then he had ever felt. The herbivore screamed in pure agony before the hybrid slashed his front leg. He fell down as she clamped down on his neck. The bull slipped out of her grip, breaking a few of her teeth. One tooth, half of it chipped, was still lodged in his neck, this would ultimately cause his fate.
He reared around and hit her in the leg. She fell over and bit his frill, taking him down. The U-Rex stood back up, her foe followed suit. The Ultimus bit his right horn, twisting and turning her head. With some effort, she snapped two thirds of the horn off, stabbing him in the eye with one of her own horns. He groaned in pain, charging. His broken horn hit her in the knee, making her yelp. She grabbed his leg, crushing it. The Trike fell, she bit down on his throat on the exact same spot. The tooth stuck there was pushed down by her mighty jaws, piercing his windpipe. He died instantly as she ate, roaring in victory. It was an otherworldly scream, scarier than the Indominus Rex's roar, scarier than Rexy's roar.
Despite being in three different locations, Rexy, Tyrance, and Volcano all heard the terrifying scream. They were scared shitless, wondering what kind of predator could make such an intimidating sound.
But the U-Rex's roar was soon drowned out by a much louder and scarier sound; Nublar's volcano erupted for the first time in 25 years. Eating a dead Edmontosaurus, Rexy turned, her eyes wide with pure fear.
Blue, Tyrance, Volcano, Spinax and his family, Shark Fang and his mate, and Longtooth and her pack all saw the blinding light. They were not prepared for what was coming.
Chapter 3: Battles Across the Island
A wall of fire charged across the island, burning any plants and animals in its path. Rexy began to flee, summoning her max speed of 32 miles per hour. She was tired, and her age didn't help. The Tyrannosaur saw a cave and stayed there as the flames rushed past. She turned around, discovering that the cavern was very large.
Tyrance and Volcano did the same thing, and the three T-Rexes ended up in the same cavern. Rexy, who was resting, spotted the other two. Tyrance and Volcano snarled at each other, ready for a fight. They were fighting for Rexy. The two rivals charged, jawlocking.
They twisted and turned, struggling to break free. Eventually, they succeeded, but teeth and blood flew everywhere. Tyrance, attempting to kill his old rival, clamped down on his neck with his max bite force of 22,000 pounds. The genetically altered Tyrannosaurus freed himself, ramming his foe. Tyrance hit a wall, that, along with the force of Volcano's head hitting him, crushed some of his ribs. Volcano bit his neck, Tyrance felt a pain he hadn't felt in 25 years. He refused to die, kicking him away.
Volcano slid back as Tyrance grabbed his snout, pressing deep into his skull.
Meanwhile, Spinax and his family were living peacefully on the edge of a cliff, for the fires had not spread to their territory. They were resting, when they heard a rustling, followed by a steady booming. Spinax peered around, looking at the trees. Once, he saw a sail, but it disappeared back into the foliage. Just as he was about to sleep, a black foot stomped onto the scene. The Spinosaurus looked at the creature with pure fear. He was facing the Ultimus Rex.
Knowing he wouldn't be able to win on his own, Spinax grunted for his mate, Blossom, to help him. The two Spinosaurs stood tall, holding their ground. Ultimus attacked first, chomping down on Blossom's neck. Spinax couldn't bear to see her in pain, ramming the devil. He stared down the hybrid, dead in her red eyes. To him, she looked like a Satan Death T-Rex from Hell. To her, he looked like a fucked up, giant crocoduck with a sail on his back.
Both beasts charged, Spinax grabbing her by the right arm. She slashed him in the neck, dragging her claws all the way to his chin. He stepped back in pain, now bearing a new set of scars. Blossom slashed the Ultimus's neck, shoving her back. But the hybrid came again, this time biting her sail. She screamed in hatred and pain as Spinax charged. However, the U-Rex threw him aside as she continued to crush Blossom's sail. Eventually, she got sick of it and stomped on her sail, crushing it, killing her. She threw the corpse over the edge of the cliff, then grabbed Spinax. Grabbing him by the snout, she threw him over the ledge, then let out a fearsome bellow of victory.
But Spinax had survived, due to being able to swim. He crawled onto a land mass, in shock of what had just happened. He peered up at where the Ultimus stood, vowing to kill her. Then, he saw Blossom's body, lying a few feet away from him. He began to cry for his mate, she had meant the world to him. But his weeps were stopped by psychotic laughter from the U-Rex. Spinax smelled his offspring's blood, she was killing his bretheren! That was enough, he couldn't save them and he knew it, he ran away, smashing through rocks and vegetation.
Meanwhile, Tyrance and Volcano were in a standoff, looking each other dead in the eye. The former chomped down on the latter's right arm, twisting. He snapped the small limb, making him roar in pain. The genetically modified carnivore threw him across the cavern, grabbing his jaw. Tyrance kicked him back, clamping down on his ankle. The other T-Rex kicked him away, pushing him back.
Soon, a new T-Rex entered the area. She was the Omega T-Rex 09, another genetically modified T-Rex, but had spikes on her back and the sides of her jaws. She was the exact same size as the Volcano Rex. The four Tyrannosaurs made a truce, then joined together as a pack. Rexy led the newly formed "Rex Squad", Tyrance by her side. The four exited the cavern as the flames died down.
Spinax was walking in one of the areas that remained untouched. He had lost his family, but there was one thing that kept him going: revenge.
The wave of destruction was over, but there was more to come, from one dinosaur in particular...
Chapter 4: Hybrid Battles
The pack of four Tyrannosaurus was hungry, so they split up to find food. Tyrance was the first to find something; a dead Triceratops. He began to eat, but another carnivore appeared...
It was another hybrid, Spinosaurus Rex. She was a T-Rex with the arms and sail of a Spinosaurus. The two theropods faced each other, Tyrance charging. They slammed into each other with the force of a train, breaking some of their ribs.
Both carnivores stumbled back, wincing. The S-Rex lunged forward, jaws agape, but Tyrance had predicted this, he dodged. She closed down on nothing, but she did something he didn't predict, she lashed out with her claws. They sunk into Tyrance's right shoulder, making him yell in pain. He spotted her sail, then latched onto it.
The S-Rex screamed in pain, reaching up with her arms. She pushed Tyrance back, making him let go. The tyrant king grabbed her by the jaw as she slashed his neck. The T-Rex pushed through the pain, kicking the S-Rex backwards.
She came back, clamping down on his throat. At the same time, she began to claw him, blood dripping on the ground. Tyrance kicked her in the side, shattering her ribs on impact. He then grabbed her right arm, snapping the limb. The Tyrannosaurus bit her sail one more time, then a sickening crunch was heard. The Spinosaurus Rex went limp, slumping to the ground.
His opponent was dead, but Tyrance felt a rift, as if he had encountered another creature bred from a Tyrannosaurus and a Spinosaurus. He daydreamed about fighting a demon that stood upright, it was about to kill him.
The T-Rex snapped back to reality and dragged his kill away. The pack met up and feasted on the herbivore. It didn't completely satisfy their hunger, but it was better than starving.
Meanwhile, Longtooth and her pack, which consisted of five other Giganotosaurus, were feasting on a dead Brachiosaurus. The Ultimus Rex approached them, flashing her teeth and baring her claws. The Gigas stood tall, charging.
Their attacker laughed, hitting one in the face. He stumbled to the side, then she latched onto his neck. Using her large arms, she snapped the Giga's neck, throwing the body at another one, who charged at her. Unfortunately for Longtooth's pack, they were on the edge of a cliff. The two Gigas, both the dead one and the about-to-be-dead one went sailing over the edge, falling into a river. She couldn't swim and drowned.
The four remaining Gigas all rammed the Ultimus simultaneously, knocking her over the cliff. She held on using her arm, but Longtooth bit down on her arm, sending her falling. They presumed the hybrid was dead, and returned to their meal.
Unbeknownst to them, the U-Rex was able to swim because she was part Spinosaurus. She swam to shore, vowing to finish the pack off.
The Ultimus Rex left the area, looking for food. She picked up a scent, a feeling of shock overtaking her, then headed in a new direction.
Chapter 5: The Big Four
Spinax had entered the charred area of the island, a few fires still burning. He heard a steady booming, then turned to see the U-Rex, enraged. She was pissed off, the creature she had attempted to kill was still alive. Spinax was also furious, having to deal with the monster that killed his family.
The Spinosaurus, determined to kill this fucker, charged, ramming the devil in the chest. She slid back as he bit her neck while slashing her ribs, summoning strength he never knew he had. The U-Rex slashed his upper arm and he stumbled back, adrenaline continuing to gush to every corner of his body as he ran at her like a madman.
She clamped down on his snout, reminding him of the pain he felt during his fight against Titanic. Spinax was determined to vanquish the agony, he pushed her away with his arms. The two predators faced each other, then Spinax lunged forward, latched onto his enemy's neck, shoving her back with his immense size. He slammed her through a tree, which tumbled down a steep slope. The Spinosaurus released his grip, shoving her down the slope. He assumed she was dead, satisfied at having avenged his mate and children.
Later, the Rex Squad, who arrived at the foot of the slope, saw the Ultimus single-handedly murder an entire group of Apatosaurus. What scared her was that she just left the area without eating. The four T-Rexes began to eat, when Longtooth and her pack arrived. The two groups snarled at each other, Tyrance staring down the alpha male of the Gigas, Giganoctus. The other two Gigas' names were Gigabyte (female) and Gigantor (male). Then, Shark Fang and his mate arrived. Finally, Spinax.
All four parties growled at each other, then attacked. Shark Fang, determined to avenge his brother, went for the Spinosaurus. The Rex Squad and the Giga Squad charged at each other like groups of soldiers. Rexy scraped Longtooth's snout with her teeth, her head swooping low. The Giga took the chance to grab her throat, but she slipped out of Longtooth's grip.
Tyrance and Giganoctus were in a standoff. The former remembered this particular Giga, but he couldn't remember where and when he had encountered him. Then, he remembered; in the prehistoric world, Giganoctus had caused the demise of his parents. Now, 65 million years later, he had the chance to take revenge.
Tyrance charged, grabbing him by the throat. The Giga grabbed his neck with his hands, slashing. Tyrance released, going for his leg. He knocked Giganoctus into a large boulder, then spun him around, throwing him across the area. The Giganotosaurus landed near a little bit of fire, feeling the heat. The T-Rex grabbed him, slamming his face into the flames. He let out a blood-curdling scream as the right side of his face was burned and scarred. Shaking his head profusely, he roared, trying to extinguish the fire.
Spinax grabbed Shark Fang's neck, slamming him into his mate. Both Carcs toppled to the ground, tumbling over each other. The Spino moved in to finish them, but the ground split between them. The floor crumbled further, the carcasses were lost and the carnivores were separated from the T-Rexes and the Gigas, who continued fighting.
Gigantor dueled Volcano, who tore his left arm off. He squealed in agony as blood squirted out of the stump. The T-Rex then chomped down on his throat, running with him in his jaws. He threw Gigantor into Gigabyte, who was fighting Omega 09.
The fire on Giganoctus's face was now gone, his face was partially burned, and he was extremely pissed off. The male Giganotosaurus attacked Tyrance viciously, clawing and biting him. The T-Rex retaliated with several chomps and headbutts.
As for Rexy, she was still fighting Longtooth. The latter clamped down on the Tyrannosaurus's left shin, she kicked her off, then grabbed her neck, sending her into a tree. The tree collapsed with the Giga on top of it. Rexy bit down on her snout, dragging the Giga into a rock. Longtooth's back ached as she stood up, wiggling out of Rexy's grip. She rammed the Tyrannosaur, sending her back to the rest of the packs.
Both groups regrouped, and prepared for an all-out assault when the ground shook. They stepped back as the Earth split between them. Now, each of the big four was separated by a giant pit in the Earth. They headed their separate ways.
Spinax walked into the charred forest that was on the chunk of land he stood on. He continued walking, eventually reaching the foot of the volcano. It erupted, a large boom ringing in his ears. Suddenly, he saw the Ultimus Rex. They stepped back, preparing to charge. This was it, the final battle...
Chapter 6: The Final Battle
Both theropods circled each other, hissing. Spinax charged first, hitting the U-Rex in the face. She shrugged it off and bit his shoulder, making him screech in pain. He slashed her chest, making her release her grip. The Spinosaurus closed his jaws on the hybrid's neck, about to snap it, but she lashed out with her arm, cutting deep into his flesh. He released, but not before shoving her into a rock. Spinax ran up onto the volcanic slope.
The Ultimus, determined to kill him, clamped down on his throat, swinging him around. He hit another rock. Then, they were at a standoff. The U-Rex had the higher ground, but Spinax charged. She simply pushed him back, hitting the rock. Before he could get up, the Ultimus bit his neck, cutting his flesh with her massive claws.
Spinax tried to shake her off, but he was too weakened to even roar at her. She raised her claws, preparing to impale him through the skull. At the bottom of the slope, the Rex Squad saw the hybrid about to kill the Spinosaurus. Rexy nodded to the rest of the pack, who nodded back, then charged. The four Tyrannosaurs charged the U-Rex, bombarding her. Rexy chomped down on her neck, saving Spinax, who headbutted the hybrid. Omega 09 grabbed the Ultimus's right arm as Tyrance bit down on her snout. Volcano closed down on the U-Rex's left leg, nearly crushing the limb.
But the U-Rex wasn't about to let them kill her. She swung around wildly, throwing Rexy into Tyrance. She stabbed Omega in the eye, making her let go. The hybrid kicked Volcano off, chipping a few of his teeth. But Tyrance came, biting her neck and throwing her aside. She got up, attacking Omega 09.
The Ultimus shoved her claws through Omega 09's upper jaw, killing her. The T-Rex slumped to the ground as Volcano charged the hybrid. However, she simply laughed and grabbed his neck, snapping it with her arms. Now, only two Tyrannosaurs remained.
Tyrance and Rexy looked at each other, ramming Ultimus in the chest. She slid back, her back to a ledge roughly the same height as her. Spinax grabbed the U-Rex's right arm, slashing her shoulder. Tyrance latched onto her sail, but she grabbed his chest, shoving him back.
On the ledge, Longtooth, Giganoctus, Gigabyte, and Gigantor noticed the T-Rexes and the Spinosaurus fighting the Ultimus Rex. Her sail was in the perfect area for one of the Gigas to bite it. They were conflicted, for they would be helping their enemies, but they would help defeat a common threat. On another smaller ledge, Shark Fang and his mate approached, there was a boulder. It was conveniently at the perfect angle to shatter Ultimus's ribs. They were conflicted for the same reason. Decisions, decisions.
Longtooth grabbed the U-Rex's sail, the hybrid looked up. At the same time, Shark Fang and his mate rammed the boulder with all their might, sending it flying into her ribs. The hybrid stumbled and fell, she grabbed the boulder and smashed it into the ledge, the Gigas fell. Their immense weight smashed the Carcs' ledge, and Shark Fang and his mate fell. Great. Now they were going to have to fight the U-Rex directly.
Shark Fang charged her, she stabbed both his eyes using her claws. He was blind, she rammed him into a jagged rock, which impaled his neck. The U-Rex took his mate and snapped her neck, the Carcs were now dead.
Gigantor ran at the hybrid, who impaled his lower jaw, then snapped his jaws alltogether. Gigabyte grabbed her tail, making her bellow in agony. The U-Rex stepped backwards, smashing Gigabyte into the same rock that killed Shark Fang. It broke her back, she smashed her skull. Giganoctus clamped down on her neck, slashing her shoulder with his arms. The Ultimus veered around, slamming him into Longtooth, then smashed the female Giga's skull. Giganoctus cried out in anger for his mate, he got up and clawed her right eye, taking out half her vision. She squealed in pain as Tyrance smashed her into a rock. She slumped to the floor as he rejoined Rexy and Spinax.
The three beasts left, but they heard a loud screaming. The U-Rex had the Spinosaurus's tail in her jaws, she pulled him toward herself. Tyrance smacked his head into that of the Ultimus's, dazing both pradators. Rexy came in, chomping down on her sail. The hybrid pushed her away, then bit her, smashing her into a boulder. Tyrance mauled the U-Rex, who twirled around, smacking Rexy into him. She walked in to kill them, but Spinax latched onto her neck, allowing the T-Rexes to tear into her ribs. The Ultimus shook Spinax off, stabbing him in the chest with on of her horns. The T-Rexes fell over as she grabbed a jagged rock. She prepared to throw it through Tyrance's skull and crush Rexy's skull with her foot.
Spinax saved them, he sent the Ultimus Rex toppling. He caught the jagged rock in his jaws and thrust it through the skull of the Ultimus Rex, ending the monster. The three remaining carnivores left as lava began to flow down the slope. They escaped, but then they fell. It couldn't be, they escaped for nothing?!
"Part of the journey is the end..."
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:24 PMExtinction? Once again really cool to see a Isla Nublar variant of Tyrance xD.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:27 PM^Actually, I'm going to change him to how you depicted him
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:31 PMYou're going to change him to fit more how he was depicted in The End and Tyrants? That will be cool, Isla Nublar Tyrance, awesome thought.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:35 PM^Yeah, I edited his description in Isla Nublar Survival
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:38 PMAwesome! Giving this article a feature, so now both of our tales can be viewed by people, and not lost to the archives lol.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 4:40 PM^Thank you, should I add Nequit Dominum to the story?
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 5:11 PMA cool homage would be if you have Isla Tyrance encounter a hybrid between a T.rex and Spinosaurus, just like Nequit Dominum. He kills him much more precisely, but he would feel a rift as if he had encountered something familiar to that.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2016 5:15 PM^Hmm...good idea. I'm also adding another Tyrannosaur creation, but it's from Jurassic World the Game
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 6:28 AMSomeone took it down from the featured discussions, not me just to inform you.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 12:42 PMNew chapter is awesome. I find it really cool that even the reborn Isla Nublar Tyrance still feels the pain he felt 65 million years ago in the battle. That is really cool.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 12:50 PM^Thanks, can you guess what the scent the U-Rex picked up at the end is?
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 12:52 PMSpinax? By the way is the U-Rex a homage to Dominum? If so that is really cool.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 12:56 PM^You guessed it.
No, the U-Rex is more of a homage to Indominus similar to how the latter was a homage to the Ultimasaurus
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 1:47 PM^I'm working on chapter 5, it should be up soon
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-09-2016 2:57 PMLORD TYRANT - Now that was an exceptionally engaging story thus far! I greatly enjoyed the way in which you presented the hybrids and their unique abilities! Excellent work! I look forward to seeing what you have in store for us next! Thank you ever so much for sharing this with us! :)
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 4:26 PM^Thank you, the story's not over yet, stay tuned!
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MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2016 7:48 PMThat was beyond awesome. I really like the Isla Nublar variants of the characters, and them remembering having met a long time ago. However, I do think Tyrance, if he was reborn and had a chance to massacre Giganoctus he would do so and would not hesitate or truce.
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MemberAllosaurusJul-10-2016 3:55 AM^But the ground split between them, so he can't kill him
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MemberAllosaurusJul-10-2016 8:00 AM^Thanks, which ending should I use?
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MemberAllosaurusJul-10-2016 8:04 AMWell you might not want to speak to me about that, considering the canon ending for The End does kill off a character. I suggest using ending 5!
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MemberAllosaurusJul-10-2016 8:07 AM^Okay, we'll see what SR says
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MemberCompsognathusOct-04-2018 11:01 PMHey,this is amazing man! Love the way Spinax defeated the Ultimus. Like your stories,keep it up!
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MemberCompsognathusOct-04-2018 11:04 PMHey,this is amazing man! Love the way Spinax defeated the Ultimus. Like your stories,keep it up!