Ultra Predator
MemberCompsognathusMay-13-2014 12:12 PMFreedom code red part 2
It was early morning I stood up from the brush where I slept. The human were standing above my home with bright flashing light. The sound of them was so annoying trying to get away form them I walked deeper into my kingdom soon the sound of them vanished, but something was strange about this spot. There was a large shining wall and a small opening there stood one of the humans not even noticing me it was going to be easy prey. Backing up I rushed the wall hitting it I felt a huge pain in my body then darkness. I awoke and saw three human standing by the fence staring at me I stood up and ran back towards where I usually sleep.
When I made it there I thought of something to do with those humans. I noticed the tree I have always been with has fallen over looking at it I picked it up in my jaw and carried it back towards the wall read to try again. The humans were gone something most have cause them to leave stopping right next to the fence I rammed the tree into the fence ripping a small hole into the wall. After a few minutes I managed to rip a hole large enough to walk thru stepping outside of the wall I noticed groups of humans rushing about to each of the metal wall. When a group made it to where I was they seemed uneasy crouching further down, I waited for them to turn around but one of them was saying something then they ran towards the large structure. Sanding up I followed behind them far enough away that they could not see me. When the human vanished into the building I quietly snuck in front of the building  something rushed by my legs turning around he saw what looked like a human but it had a head of a different creature with he had never seen before it quickly ran off into the dark.
Not Interested in something that fast so I looked for where it came from another large metal wall was in my way but there was an opening on the bottom. Crouching down he saw and smelled the blood and death around him his hunger grew in side. Look at the wall he slammed himself into the wall and the wall bent he did it twice more before the wall fell forward. The human seem to be on top of a wall but the creature on the bottom where trying to get to them. The human were too high but these creature weren’t even paying attention to him he quickly grabbing one in his jaws he gulped it down it made a yipping sound before the creature was killed quickly tohe there were alerted but they fled from me. After eating the creature he was still hungry his sense of smell told him not to eat the corpses something was wrong with them.
Looking around for more prey to eat he saw one of the humans and one of the creatures he walked closer toward them they have not noticed him. Silently walking towards the two he had to decide which one to attack the human was too far away to grab but the other one was not with a quick burst of speed he caught the creature in his jaws it hissed snapping down again it died from the force blood splattered everywhere. Swallowing the creature he heard the sound of the other predators in the island but something was amiss there roars were not of their own.Being trapped in the prison so long he could tell that they were not normal something was wrong. He Roared back to all of them the whole building shook the whole interior island went silent. After that he thought to himself he was finally free but was it worth escaping one hell for another he wondered could those roar be worse than being trapped and put on display could it be really worth it?
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Something Real
MemberTyrannosaurus RexMay-13-2014 7:24 PMJohn Morrison
MemberCompsognathusMay-13-2014 9:38 PMGood, it's here. The animals perspective gives the story more depth and inproves the plot. Good work and can't wait to see more.
Ian Malcolm: No I'm, I'm simply saying that life - uhhh - finds a way.