Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsJan-08-2014 8:34 PMChapter 3: Hunting
The canyon echoed with the Andesaurus’ bellows. They were a few miles away from the Giganotosaurus pack, whose members were hiding behind several rocks.
But even before they could see the titanosaurs, the Giganotosaurus could smell them. And one Andesaurus in particular had caught their attention. It was an adult female, and she was in a bad way. She was suffering from the mid-stages of a lung infection. She was having trouble breathing, but she was still able move fairly quickly for an infected sauropod.
Hades ordered each pack-mate to a tactical position along each wall of the canyon so that they could surround the herd on the left and the right. He was hoping to exploit the skittish nature of the Andesaurus to cause a stampede in order to separate their intended victim.
As the herd had nearly gone past the Giganotosaurus pack, Hades let out a loud bellow which spooked the herd. As soon as that happened, all the hunters except Hades sprang out of their hiding places and raced into the herd of bellowing giants.
It was chaos inside the stampede. The Giganotosaurus weaved through the herd like demons, snapping their jaws at the sauropods. This terrified the Andesaurus, who started to bump into each other in order to avoid their pursuers. But the sick female found it very difficult to keep up with the herd; the dust that was being kicked up by the stampede was making it very hard for her to breathe. An older, larger female also collided with her, bruising her front leg and impairing her ability to walk quickly.
Not all was well with the Giganotosaurus either. Despite their superior speed, there was very little room to manoeuvre through the stampeding Andesaurus. As well, the youngest female Giganotosaurus got her bell rung as she tried to penetrate the wall of sauropods, and was out of action from the start.
Hades observed all this on the hill of the canyon. Due to his weight and advanced age of 27 years, his legs couldn’t carry him as quickly as the others could. Back in his day, he would run headlong into herds of titanosaurs and emerge without breathing hard. Now, he was an ambush predator, relying on his size and brute strength to intimidate and overpower his victims.
Pretty soon Achilles and the remaining three females cornered the Andesaurus, and Hades moved down the hill. It was his job to make sure his quarry doesn’t escape, and to get a good bite in when he could. Thanks to his superior strength, his bite force outweighed those of his subordinates, especially when delivering the signature hatchet bite of carcharodontosaurids and allosaurids.
The sick Andesaurus was surrounded, with two females on her left, Achilles on a low ledge level to her back on the right, and another female hissing and spitting in front of her. And when Hades let out a blood-curdling scream, she couldn’t help but think that the next few hours will be her last. The Giganotosaurus didn’t intend to kill her right now, given her large size, but she will succumb to her lung infection soon. Without the protection of her herd, she was doomed.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-08-2014 8:44 PMGood job. I really enjoy this story.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-08-2014 8:51 PMNice. Good chapter.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-08-2014 8:56 PMI hope you enjoy my next story as much as I enjoy this one, I'm going to start posting on the 13th.
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DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-09-2014 7:00 AMGood chapter, and I love the story as well. Honestly, I didn't expectyou could do such a great job. That, or the very good fights PFG writes.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-10-2014 3:33 PMHey,
I have been following the Tyrant's Roar religiously ever since the first chapter. Although this is a great chapter, i must say that i did rather enjoy the very vivid imagery from the second chapter;
"Poppaea was even more enamoured by the seven ton god in front of her. She tried to focus on his solid build and rippling muscles, but her eyes kept being drawn to his red head and throat.."
I was wondering if you could include some more.. inimate scenes with Poppaea and Tytus. I will attach a link to help you write the details more vividly.
http://dsc.discovery.com/video-topics/other/dinosaur-videos/dinosaur-penis.htm
Looking forward to the next chapter AlphaDino!!!!!!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-10-2014 5:42 PMWoah man, woah. We don't need to go that far in the story. Most of us here on JW are teenagers (I'm one of the youngest at 14, 15 in March), and we don't need to have a sex scene in a story. Staying mature, a sex scene is unnessesary and a topic best to not speak of on these forums. Leaving maturity for a moment, I understand the 69 in your screename.
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Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsJan-10-2014 6:46 PMI'm glad you enjoyed the story as well Super T.rex. I wanted to include a lot of vivid imagery in my story, as it only draws the reader in and enhances the experience of feeling the setting and characters.
But Mr Happy is right. A sex scene would be going too far for a story like this. Although it would be interesting to consider, there should be a level of maturity kept and a sex scene would cross the line. I did consider adding one in very early on (way before I made my account on JW and long before I started writing this), but I decided to scrap it because of that reason.
Nonetheless, I will mention that there was an intimate moment in a later chapter, but there won't be any sexual details.
And by the way, I have seen many clips of Tyrannosaurus Sex, including the one on the link you posted. It's something that very few people ever think about when they do think about the life of dinosaurs.