It has been five years since Longclaw found the herd,five years since INGEN brought back the search party.He has become 10 meters long and 12 metres high.The green therizino,called mint, has been following him since the forest fire.But Redridge had matured too and became the leader of his pack as well as being the top predator in his area since there aren't many tyrannosaurs in the area and the charcarodontosaurs only patrol the south side of the mountain.But the problem is Longclaw's herd is their main food source.Longclaw decides to leave the herd with mint to find a safe place to their eggs.At 12 PM they ran into the forest and toward the beach.They ran past the torvosaur nest.Redridge,always sensing an enemy wakes up and takes two torvosaurs with him to avenge his parents.Mint and Longclaw ran as fast as they could.As the sun rose, the two torvosaurs saw a dead edmontosaurus.One ran straight for it while the other went toward rustling in the trees.The torvosaur who went right in was greeted by the largest male tyrannosaurus he had ever seen.The other found a smaller but still large tyranno in the trees.The male rex roared so loud Redridge,Longclaw and Mint stopped and looked on.They saw the male pushing his torvo to the floor with shrieks from his victim.He bit it's neck mercilessly,breaking it and killing it instantly.But what Redridge saw was more traumatic than what Longclaw and Mint saw.He saw his fellow pack member biting down on on the females back.She bit back and snapped the torvo,who was redridges's sisters,back in half.She fell to the ground and knocked the female over while doing so.The male heard the females crys and ran to the location.He barreled into her like a bullet train.He stomped her into a mess of blood and flesh.She looked at Redridge with eyes,the saddest eyes anything could ever see,before she was gone.Redridge High-tailed it out of there.Know he held two grudges.
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Hope you liked this part,Try to guess who the tyrannosaurs are!see you next week
Good Chapter. Took me a minute to figure out wether or not you had just killed Thorn, glad to see you didn't, and nice job writing them into it.
One thing though, Got where? New World still takes place back in the Late Cretaceous in a real screwed up location in the Gulf of Mexico. Doesn't matter though, good job, and it's nice to be the inspiration for something.
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I think they ARE the most famous Rexes on the forums (most famous pair at least). Good job still, and good depiction from the 3rd person Torvosaurus view. Few minor things though: Battle was longer, Thorn shoved the one Torvosaurus really far, and Thorn wasn't bitten in the back.
Still good, don't get me wrong, I still liked it, I guess I notice these things a bit better because I wrote the fight.
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Nice. Now I'm curious as to which Tyrannosaurus(not counting Rexy, haha) is the most famous on the forums.
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Let's go to the viewers. I'm kinda leaning towards Terrance and Thorn (Not because they are my creation) because I've got three stories up where they are important, and I've got two more coming.
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They're up there. Guess they're only competition for that title is Storm. While he doesn't play a major role in any of my upcoming stories, his legacy is present in all of them in one way or another.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
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I know. Just think, after my next two stories, I don't have any other ideas for them, so I'm going to have to come up with some other Characters for my next few stories.
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Yeah. You already know what my next stories are about(since you're my "advisor," so you know what I mean when I said what I did ;)
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98
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Yep, and because you're my "advisor", you know what I've got coming up (not much on DD9097 though, nobody knows much more than the schedule). I may need you to do some advisory stuff soon though.
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"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
―Alpha-98
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JW forum on Scified: home of many stories, fights and drawings :)
Now, can't wait for them all. I'm already outlining some stories after TDD, but, as always, my main ocuupation is paleoart. I have a lot of projects in mind, and some of you add new projects in my inventory (ahem, *cough- MrHappy, RexFan, Delta -cough*) :)
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