a monster's breath 1

Hi this is the first edition of the story monster’s breath hope you enjoy! It is a bright sunny day in Alberta Canada, the north valley is the hunting ground of the largest tyrannosaurs pair in Alberta Canada. 3 weeks ago the female laid a clutch of 12 eggs yet unfortunately only 2 hatched, the male Rafael and the female Theo are about 7 inches long and are quit playful. 2 weeks later and they are already play fighting they wander off too far, then suddenly a dryptosaurus pair spring from the trees above giving chase to Rafael and Theo, Rafael however is slow and trips on a log and falls, he quickly attempts to hide in the hollow log, just before he gets slashed something drags the dryptosaur pair out before silence strikes the forest, he looks up, and it looks like nothing ever happened. When the parents arrive they look at each other nervously then something unexpected happens the male carries them in his mouth and dashes out of the forest abandoning their mother. 4 hours later they reach the top of the valley and everyone is sleeping, except Rafael who looks from the top seeing his mother in the clearing before 2 white creatures attack her and kill her, he doesn’t know what they are except they are white and big really BIG! In the morning they hear a menacing roar before father pushes them and growls they understand and instantly run away, Rafael looks back at his father as he is entering the forest in sadness before he continues running.. 20 minutes later and he is on the highest area in the whole valley. They then see the father staggering from the forest before pummeling to the ground. He then sees the 2 white figures that killed his mother last night, he is then determined to get his revenge from the white figures, 3 minutes later and they appear from the trees he sees them clearly they are a pair of.............SPINOSAURS so that is it for today i hope you like it, and the series as a whole!