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FBR S2 Velociraptor VS Triceratops

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x_paden_x

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:15 PM
"g'day g'day g'day" -hammond Today, Ladies and gentlemen FBR takes a brave step forward to attempt something we've never done before... we venture from FBRs core, and place a story during the parks glory... (But for the sake of FBR we're using the JP raptors, not the legit ones, the Deinonychus parody... also... were going off of JP logic, not the exact definition of them... so ill be using my trusty field guide for both raptor and trike) [img]http://s3.amazonaws.com/pizap_gallery/071813/medium/pizap.com10.0299635133706033231374182901622.jpg[/img] Velociraptor VS Triceratops Raptor [img]http://sugarshacksouthie.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/velociraptor-literal-version-30063-1269011216-1.jpg[/img] (how'd this get in here????) [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130315233016/deadliestfiction/images/6/67/Two_velociraptors_.jpg[/img] [img]http://media.liveauctiongroup.net/i/5736/8632840_1.jpg?v=8CE70FDFAF1B540[/img] Velociraptor mongoliensis was first discovered in the Mongolian Gobi Desert, 11 feet long, 6 feet tall, and a pack hunter, it lived during the early Cretaceous. this dinosaur is incredibly intelligent a pack hunter and has a sickle shaped talon on each foot, used for combat and hunting to inflict deep wounds in its prey total in fight:5 Triceratops [img]https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRke7ISQ6YnpdHJd2w81YKc7h8g_szlJz8cUm-XOk7DJuBzuD4Csw[/img] [img]http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-8YmU_76tGo4/Tydhr8tgG9I/AAAAAAAAALM/Sb6q_64oE9Q/s1600/TricyclingTriceratops001.jpg[/img] (for god sakes... WHAT IS GOING ON???) [img]http://0.tqn.com/d/webclipart/1/0/j/y/4/Triceratops.png[/img] Triceratops Horridus was first discovered in north america, 30 feet long, 12 tons, 10 feet tall with horns, lived in late Cretaceous. Also a herd animal, and a herbivore, trike wasnt afraid to fight, using its 3 facial horns to inflict wounds on its predators, or rivals, it size along makes it a formidable creature... and opponent FIGHT (sorry guys... pizap was being mean again... so no epic fight art... if youd like though GO AHEAD AND MAKE SOME FOR THIS) 5 months before the accident at the park The alpha stuck her head through the ferns, brought her hand up and pulls back the ferns, revealing her whole body. She raises her head and makes a clicking sound... calling her pack from the wilderness inside the large paddock, She had seen materials going down the road, and she had seen them building some sort of a smaller enclosure... she heard a responding call, four to be precise, which was followed by the appearances near her. They were planning... this was soon ended by the alpha motioning towards a bent over tree, It lay 12 feet away from the fence... with a moat and a barricade taking up the space, They watched as a video camera watched them, it rotated 90 decrees the opposite direction, only with eye contact they executed this plan fluently They came to the tree and ran up its tilted bark, they jumped using they're strong leg muscles to jump the 12 feet over the fence and landing excellently. "I really dont think Michael Jackson would fake his death..." ray said lighting another cigarette "All the evidence is there... He seems like the guy to do it" gerry said wafting the smoke away from his nose "I really dont care, this seems like a bunch of horse sh-" robert said getting cut off by ray "Do you think he would though..." ray said taking a breath from his cigarette "oh defiantly....." muldoon said before getting side tracked by a snout appearing out of bushes on a console camera "Robert?... whats wrong?" jerry asked, following muldoon's gaze towards the monitor... the alpha watched the monitor camera rotate in the opposite direction, she lead her pack out of the bushes, across another service road... and into the brush on the other side, concealed by the heavy tropical forest, they ran. Within the hour, they came across another paddock they crossed the tour road carefully. A rectangular sign with the skull of a triceratops stood unfazed by the raptors, beside the fence... "W-what do you intend to do to them Muldoon" a worried hammond said over the phone, Robert cocked the shot gun and slipped in 5 shells, as he moved the phone over to his other shoulder "its not what i intend to do to them, its what they intend to do to us, John you've got 5 ferocious prehistoric animals running around outside of their paddocks on your island, there's nothing more we can do then bring them in..." gerry stepped up beside Muldoon and took the shot gun from his hands, and thrusted a tranq rifle into them. "you must bring them in unharmed Muldoon... they're important to the park"hammond said, getting annoyed and worried "We'll try our best, but if its necessary, I will bring them down" Robert said cracking open the dart case and sliding them into the gun. Hammond sighed "fine..." and the call ended, Muldoon tossed the rifle into the jeeps console and put the keys in the ignition gerry got in beside him "it will take the rangers a while to mobilize the transport truck"as he laid the shot gun down on the back seat. Muldoon grinned as the jeep roared out of the garage... The raptors, were now in the triceratops paddock, they walked slowly in the tall grass on the edges of the clearing, the alpha sticks her head above the grass, taking in her packs positions and the preys, she makes a loud clicking whistle like sound. She receives 4 responses, the youngest raptor steps out of the bushes, blowing they're cover. the other raptors stay concealed... waiting to watch the failure of this juvenile The alpha triceratops stands watch over her herd, her younger prodeche (sorry.. dictionary wasn't any help..) the beta of the herd, stands beside her, the alpha dwarfs the beta by a mere 6 feet (tallest point). she watches over grassland ahead of her, watching for any predators... she watches as a small raptor races out of the grassland, straight towards the herd, taking on this new threat she calls out a warning to her herd and beta, the herd makes a circle shape, the beta takes watch over it. the alpha charges out towards the opponent letting out a warning bark, the raptor ignores and jumps foreword at the triceratops meeting the raptor in her mid jump, the trike flips her head, her horns piercing along the top of the right thigh all the way to left arm and then right back towards its head knocking it backwards. it slams into the ground and slides on to its side, it lets out a wail of pain, the alpha charges it again for good measure killing it instantly as its horn digs into its neck, she brings her head up again and flicks the raptor off of her horn it slides to the side of the clearing. as she inspects her kill, she is un aware of another predator charging at her, the alpha raptor lets out another call, all of her pack reveal them selves and attack... the beta lets out a distress call warning the alpha too late... the trike spins around as a raptor jumps onto its back and begins tearing flesh off her back, the alpha lets out a shriek of pain and rears, flipping the raptor of its back, recovering from the wound, the trike side steps and leans from side to side, many arteries in her back have been punctured, not enough to kill her, but enough to seriously harm her. dazed she becomes an open target, the alpha raptor jumps up onto her back near her neck and begins tearing flesh off her back from spots, while the left over raptors in her pack nip at her feat , one jumps and uses her sicle like claw on her foot to tear open her a small section of the trikes belly as the triceratops steps back she only opens the wound more. The beta cant watch her mentor die, she leaves the herd to defend themselves, she charges out toward the raptors, as the alpha falls to her side. the raptors gather on the right side of the alpha trike, they slice away at the opened wound, and feast. the beta is filled with rage, she charges up to the gathering of raptors, they all flee, except one, the second oldest raptor still feeds, the trike tilts her head, making her horns straight. she charges the foolish raptor, it brings its head out of the alphas opened belly, only to witness its own death... the betas nose horn pierces the chin of the raptor, flicks the raptors head back, snapping its spine, the raptor then falls underneath the trike, and is trampled to death under the weight of the animal, the trike stops itself, after having killed the raptor it comes back to see the crushed body of the raptor, its bones have been flattened to near dust, leaving only the outlined frail remains and skin of the raptor. the beta comes to the alphas side, as the alpha takes in its last breath, its eyelids shut, it has died... the beta bows its head, it must avenge its mentor... she lets out a howl like bark, the raptors charge her , but she is not as skilled as her mentor, she is like a child with a gun, filled with rage and vengeance she meets their charge, she strikes on raptor with her horn flinging it into the bushes, she spins to meet the leftover 2 raptors she charges, but misses both. its hard to stop such a giant creature thats charging at that speed fast, she spins out and lands on her side rocks and dirt scratching her, she gets up and charges again, spinning out.... yet again, she is tiring, the raptors notice this as the third raptor steps out of the bushes dazed and confused it falls over again... and stays there... as the beta charges again, she catches herself before she spins out, but she has tired herself out, the raptors use this to their advantage and attack, they both land on her back, she begins bucking and flinging her head trying to get them off, but they're latched on with their claws and teeth, As the alpha raptor delivers a deadly blow to her neck she falls to her knees, then she falls to her side.. the raptors come to her belly, the alpha jumps in the air, talons drawn... BANG BANG BANG 3 darts fly through the air, knocking the alpha right out of the air she summersaults and lands with flat on her stomach, the other raptor looks out towards the origin of the darts, BANG BANG only to be struck in the cheek and chest with darts, she falls to her side, the third raptors gets up frightened by the sounds, but she is still disoriented by her recent... ahem flight she trots over to the alpha raptor almost falling over on the way, she sniffs the motionless body of the alpha and looks up towards the jeep... Muldoon grabs the shot gun, he shoots the dirt around the last raptor, it shocks the raptor so much, it paralyzes it... "All targets down" harding said over the radio "Rangers, mobilize the helicopter too... your going to need it" he hung it up on his breast pocket, he grabbed the tranq gun. and went to inspect the targets... it looked as if a war had raged in this clearing, he came down to the third raptor and injected a needle into its neck, making sure it would be paralyzed, he came over to the alpha trike, she had died, he patted her neck "you only did what you needed to..." he said as he picked up the radio and reported the tags of the dead animals epilogue the rangers landed with the truck and helicopter minutes later, they loaded the beta trike into the helicopters large cage... it required a lot of pushing... she was air vacked to the medical center at the vistor center, the raptors were returned to their paddock, and they're smaller paddock was assembled much faster, the dead dinos were buried in the mountains, with a statue as a tombstone... They all made full recoveries, lady Margaret became alpha of the herd, and became more skilled in combat... Well... that was interesting... a much different ending for FBR... Palaeontologists View: Raptor Velociraptor was a very small and agile, and judging by leg and bone structure it was capable Of r each ing speeds of nearly sixty to sixty five miles per hour. Velociraptor was incredibly smart, in fact judging by CAT scans, was the smartest raptorid to live in the Cretaceous period. Excluding the Troodon chordata of course. Velociraptor has superb vision and fair smell, and it was able to efficiently and ruthlessly coordinate attacks. Velociraptors would attack anything it could find to be suitable for a meal. It's only weakness is that Velociraptors are only strong in packs, even at Deinonychus size. The Velociraptor had a skiing sickle claw that would slow it down over rough terrain. Because Velociraptor is so fast, this also makes it very fragile. An impact of any kind would at least break a few bones. Velociraptor, fast, smart, ruthless, fragile,Velociraptors were also hollow boned animals, meaning they had to coordinate their attacks well to avoid injury. Judging by their intelligance they would brood to an extent that probably wouldn't let them stray from the nest, Meaning they probably paired up after they mated, but after brooding season they would go back to their packs trike For one thing mobility would be seriously limited with this animal, and between his massive and heavy frill and his short legs, it would be out of the question to turn and run from a predator like a large Velociraptor. However, a Triceratops has 3 major assets to help protect it. First and foremost is it's solid bone frill. Unlike most ceratopsians, Triceratops had a frill that could actually serve as protection, although the two notable horns on Triceratops were fragile to an extent. The second asset of protection for a Triceratops was it's weight. It could safely plow into a predator, while stunning the predator or breaking a predators leg. In this fight, if a Triceratops were to roll over on a velociraptor, it would instantly crush and kill him. Finally, Triceratops herded. This suggests that there would be protection in numbers, making a predators job that much harder. I actually believe that a Triceratops Horridus weighed about 12 tons if I said differently earlier. The Triceratops had a fairly large brain,and therefore had fair intelligence. It may be puzzled on how to react to situations with rare or unfamiliar objects. It may not know how to react to a Velociraptor WELLL thats all for now... With our water FBR coming soon, id also like to say... were going to have a chaos effect FBR... if you dont know what it is... as my good friend always says... GOOGLE IT Writer:Paden Poster:Paden Advisory: Dinofights, Rex fan, Future paleo uh... i think im missing something... hmmm.... If youve got any ideas for our chaos effect FBR... please include them below This is Paden... signing off... -FBR

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

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x_paden_x

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:16 PM
WELLL... it took about... 9 days of writing plotting and brainstorming... but its here...

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

Rex Fan 684

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:26 PM
Very well done. I hope everyone liked it. They will only get better ;)
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-18-2013 7:34 PM
That was awesome. One thing though, five Raptors escape, I would load a SPAS-12 to it's maximum 8 rounds, and bring at least 3 of them. Maybe I say this because I am a bit of a gun nut, but other than that, Awesome.

Jack of all trades. Master of none

Makaveli7

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:44 PM
Wow. Perfect combination of story, humor, fight and facts. Wonderful.
Future Team Raptor member

Rex Fan 684

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:45 PM
I will say, those two pics were funny.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98

Rex Fan 684

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:49 PM
Sorry, this is very random but I need to post it... Hope it works... [img]http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m7a3ieb4f71qclrpzo1_400.jpg[/img] PS- This is the backup version. The original is better.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98

Deltadromeus

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:50 PM
Wow, great job, and great shot Muldon. Sorry that you will be killed by the next alpha, you are a great guy. I loved how the velociraptor used its brain to get out.

Hi

Makaveli7

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:54 PM
Haha @Rex Fan I copied and pasted the URL and removed the [img] things XD lady and the tramp Jurassic edition
Future Team Raptor member

Rex Fan 684

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:56 PM
IKR, I wish that version worked, haha. Oh well.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98

Makaveli7

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 7:57 PM
I tried it again and it didn't work...
Future Team Raptor member

Rex Fan 684

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 8:08 PM
Yeah, I don't think it will :(
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98

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MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 8:15 PM
Impressive! The fight itself was great but what really made it was the story. The funny pics and conversation were awesome too :)

x_paden_x

MemberCompsognathusJul-18-2013 8:22 PM
@MrHappy9097 ... I think we all know your a gun nut... BUT we agreed to make sure we didnt make any movie paradoxes that we would only kill off 2, as a cover up, they made it sound like the alpha (she survived) killed them off... but she only really killed off 3 ... there was 8 to begin

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

futurepaleontologist1

MemberCompsognathusJul-19-2013 12:32 AM
Great work Paden. Really great work!
Pity is for the living. Envy is for the dead. -Mark Twain

DinoFights

MemberCompsognathusJul-19-2013 8:44 AM
Great job! I'm impressed with the story behind it especially!
Announcement Coming Soon Prepare yourselves, DinoFans!

x_paden_x

MemberCompsognathusJul-19-2013 10:46 AM
Ive gotz an announcment, I was working throughout the night, and i got the trailer for FBR 4 done!!!!!! it sums up what fbr is... and FBR 4.... i should have it up some time today

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

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