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Terrance's Story Part 1

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexJuly 17, 20131180 Views6 Replies
I was going to wait until later, but it is very hot where I live (yesterday felt like 40 degrees Celsius, and it's going to be hotter than that. Anyway, here it is: A New Tyrant Terrance hatched like any normal T-Rex. There is something special about him though. Nothing knows this, not even him. This is for the simple reason that what shaped Terrance and made him special, is yet to happen. He looks up at the sun, the jungle, everything in the area where his nest is, and he was amazed by the beauty and coloration of his new surroundings. There is a steady noise that is coming closer. Terrance isn't aware that his nine ton parents just returned from a successful hunt and have enough food to last about a week for the three of them. When Terrance realizes there is something behind him, he turns around and sees his mother towering above him. He was scared until his mother sets down the chunk of meat in her mouth and gestured for him to eat. Terrance enjoys his first meal, then awkwardly walks around with his parents watching. A short time later, his parents lay down and go to sleep. Terrance huddles up to his mother's chest and falls asleep with her heartbeat calming him as he falls asleep. About a week later, his parents are on the hunt, and are forced to leave Terrance on his own. Terrance was the only one to hatch from the nest of ten eggs. Terrance knows his parents won't go far, but he is still nervous on his own and decides to hide under a pile of leaves. A short time later, a pack of Dromeosaurus walks past the nest, eat all the eggs and move on. What the pack didn't realize was Terrance was hidden in the leaves. When the pack was gone, his parents returned, nervous about what the Dromeosaurus pack was doing, and they call for Terrance, who emerges from the pile of leaves that saved his life. Hope you enjoyed it. Any feedback for Part 1? I have the other parts already typed out, so I could make some edits to adjust.

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Rex Fan 684
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Nice job. Looking forward to the next one.
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Aaaaaammmmmaaaaazzzzzziiiiiinnnnngggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was an awesome, great plot, great writing. I could understand every move. I can't wait for the next one.

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I agree with Rex Fan 684 i can't wait for the next part
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Sweet. I'll be reading Terrance's story for sure!
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Lord Vader
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Obviously all the parts can't be as impressive as others, andPart 2 slows down a little. Thanks everyone.

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When I write my stories, the second part isn't as good, but I have a feeling it will still be a great part.

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