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I guess this would gave a way in for Jeff Goldblum's Malcolm - giving his view on how 'Dinos had their chance' and 'nature selecting them for extinction', as he states in JP1. Interfering with this again will bring up that whole discussion around playing God. Perhaps the army hijacks this evacuation and starts sending dinos to the US for 'safety' 

Well I'm glad that Blue is returning.

Hype.

THE VENGEFUL REX - This is quite neat! I very much enjoyed the imagery and descriptions you gave of each character! :)

^Well, he is the steed you gave to me...XD

Destructo the Carnotaurus is God tier.

All I can say is, at least five of the characters will die.

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I enjoy the detailed descriptions you continuously put forth into your story. Good work so far.

Very nice.

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^https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JkNLAUwSFGw

Sounds intriguing, can't believe Thunderstorm's dead.

GORILLAGODZILLA - You did an excellent job! Nothing about this presentation strikes me as childish. :)

Not just that though. ;););););)

^It looked like Maledictus Dominum.

Thank you SR, dinosaur stories I think at-least have to have vast amounts of visual depth in order to pass--otherwise they can just come off as childish in a bad way.

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Also did anyone catch Tyran's hallucination, and the implications of it? ;)

Not bad, TVR.

THE VENGEFUL REX - Oh, I can already tell this is going to be most excellent! :)

GORILLAGODZILLA - Oh, wow! The imagery you evoked with the opening of this chapter was exceptionally compelling! Furthermore, the body of your work is most fantastic in its detail and depth. You constantly improve in your ability to describe your scenes and characters! Excellent work! Thank you ever so much for continuing to share this superb adventure with us! :)

Yep. I told you he's related to that pack. Specifically, he's the nephew of the original Acrano.

^Pretty sure that was the name of Acranthic's second in-command from Tyrants.

Acrano is his last name.

Btw the Acro's name was Acrone when you first introduced him.

^It will be interesting when the paths of these four cross.

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Very cool.

Tyria's stronger than everyone above her except Egypt. She's literally the mate of the strongest animal of all time, the Tyrant Lady. Now I'm going to have to give her some feats in potential post The End 2 stories.

The story is finished.

Cliffhanger ending.

This isn't a new story, but the original chapter just wouldn't update. I tried to add this chapter probably three or four times but it didn't work. One more chapter left.

I like your take on the final battle, good job.

^Pharaoh is not his name XD, he is Egypt! And the Tyrant King is Tyrance.

^In real life, they're actually the three most complete Tyrannosaurus rex skeletons!

THE VENGEFUL REX - This was quite an excellent ending! I very much enjoyed the way in which you introduced Pharaoh and had him join forces against Nequit! :)

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THE VENGEFUL REX - Oh, this was a very good segment! I very much like the way in which Sue is presented! :)