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Excellent entry Carnosaur, well done.

Thanks!!!

Sounds intriguing. A whole new bunch of FBR content. Looking forward!

Great story Carnosaur.

Love this chapter, well done! :)

i pm'd you asf i could do a parasaurolophus and you said it was ok

Against any other dinosaur, im on Spino but against Rex, my true allegiance is to Tyrannosaurus Rex

What the...

Apparently, I cannot update my Own Bloody article.

As, Why pachey has dissapeared.

He ended up doing Parasaurolophus, not Pachey. I ended up doing that one, and i must say i was really confused on what was going on there

...

Parasepolosaurus was not an option.

Whatever.

*Updated*

again i did choose parasaurolophus

Oh well, your welcome. I swear if I do it again...

Thanks for letting me know Catzilla 

cracks me up every time, and thanks guys!

again carboasur

has anybodie recibed the raiting from paden?

Excellent Carbosaur.

GODDAMNIT I DID IT AGAIN. CARNOSAUR. NO 'B'.

a writing chalange from x_padeen_x

Awesome carnosaur, also can somebody please tell me what a DWC is?

nice story carnosaur

Well I guess I could do it...

what i meant is something like for example

when you say someone is very angry you could say 

''hisr eyes glowed in a strong color of red, almost as if they where made of fire''

instead of sayng

''he was bursting with furry''

I don't want to make these things too long. And I think their emotions are described enough when necessary.

sugestion raptor, to make chapters longer describe their emotions and the enviorment, thats how they do it in many fanfics ive read

Awesome chapter!

If he does die it won't be so soon.

Thanks for enjoying!!!

Thanks Hiphopanamous!!!

i liked the story, actuall i expected tom to die

Paden is an artist. You may remember he drew a cool drawing of Raptor-401 from my first stroy.

Me! Spino is my favorite Dinosaur! :D

Nice fight, Was rooting For MEgaraptor.

I am a Spinosaurus Fan, along with Gojira2K. He's on vacation so I will tell you for him.

Team rex, but i do like Spino a good deal. We have a lot of decent Spino fans on the forum now, although that didn't used to be the case...I agree with the 'Peace over immaturity' statement you just made...well said.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CARBOSAUR!!!!!

Goddamnit I mean CARNOSAUR!!!

Pretty damn awesome, thanks Allotitan!

And thanks guys!!

Hmm... An ultimate dinosaur drawing... Go on...

I'm on Team Spino.

@Evan123

It's advised that you PM Me over one of the Species for the Challange, Or Faults will be applied to the overall score.

Happy birthday to you Carnosaur!